Comments byINTRANSIT, 921–940 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

...here's your sign.....
on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer 26 Nov 2003, 6:03 AM
Like Bruce Lee jumping out of a cherry blossom.
on untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote 25 Nov 2003, 7:48 PM
Well, They seem to say the same thing, one and two.
Save two for something else. The animals don't strike quite the chord themusical terms do.
beautiful funny nonsense. and what of your screen play? my hooven brother.
replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 2:58 PM
aye, aye, we shall.
replying on Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 2:47 PM
I know. The irony here is, I was born in NY. NYC infrirmary.'67.
My parents moved us all to Colorado when I was three. My grandmother took me back and on a ferry trip for a few days. I made mention of this in my poem "common ground"
New York aint (all) bad.
replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 2:18 PM
I'm sold. I like you. ...so spaniard, we will go to rome together, and have bloody adventures and the great hall will suckle us until we are fat and happy and can suckle no more....
replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 12:18 PM
I suppose we're a different breed of poet. We prefer to let people get what they want from it vs. making them see or feel a certain way. After all, life itself is open ended, yes?
replying on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 11:38 AM
Is it so wrong that I leave something to the readers imagination?
replying on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 25 Nov 2003, 10:56 AM
Ok. I missed the point. Touche. I still think it needs better organized.
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=56167

I'm wide open. take a shot.
on How to audition for a cereal ad by horus8 24 Nov 2003, 4:30 PM
The milk was cold and deep, wasn't it? and you thought you would be speaking. lol.
replying on Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT 24 Nov 2003, 8:16 AM
the atlantic sentence should be taken as a whole. typo is no mo.
thanks for the flowers. anything else I might have done better?
on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 24 Nov 2003, 6:26 AM
A big box of mumbo-jumbo. If dug into, sorted and organized, a poem can be had. Find more nasty effects of the tea. tea is bad. tea is bad. show me why. don't just say "it eats brain cells" do some research.
replying on Ode to my Poopy by Samantha 24 Nov 2003, 6:20 AM
That's exactly what I was thinking. LOL!
I'd like to see this one perfomed open mic.
on Mecca was mud in my backyard by Y2kSlamPoet 23 Nov 2003, 11:13 AM
Curses! Foiled again! this is much better than what i wrote about my mom.
Grrrr. This is well done, but, I am qite tiring of the war theme. Maybe I'm tiring of the war.>.<

Where is -=Dark_Angel=- to alleviate this stress?
on Islands Of Our King by Caducus 23 Nov 2003, 11:02 AM
Gads! I do say 'ol chap. You seem to be quite the runner at present.
Jesus has retractable thums and will use them to carry you by your head, thumbs in ears, then retract, and send you dripping, tripping singing, wheeling, reeling, into the sunken bucket to sink into the blackest of cherry red pimentos where you will die from the salt having absorbed your bodily fluids leaving you as thin as a shaven fingernail nerve.
Spun me right round with the bobble -head and couch potato theme. almost passed you up.
intelligently wacky.