replying on Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare
21 Nov 2003, 4:04 PM
it's offical. I am a dunce. can't believe I missed that little detail. gawd.
on Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare
21 Nov 2003, 8:31 AM
yes. Also: when the ache of ancestors happens before death, cattyness can be cancelled and life dictated, instead.
bravo.
P.S. Sorry to lead you on. I'm no collegiate.
bravo.
P.S. Sorry to lead you on. I'm no collegiate.
on Earth, or, When You Take Me From This Good Rich Soil by david
21 Nov 2003, 5:33 AM
The only thing I don't like about this is its' quasi-repetetive nature. I thumbed through your file. Write more please.
on A Parable Of War by Caducus
21 Nov 2003, 5:23 AM
Best war poem I've read in a while. Your development becomes you.
replying on Intersection by INTRANSIT
20 Nov 2003, 2:50 PM
the hawk was looking at the top of my head(poll) or "sizing me up"
gaze on gaze-- looked each other in the eye
grinding line-- straight ground transportation.
but do these things warrant a higher score? I know I shouldn't base everything on this rating chart, it's just convenient.
10-Q
gaze on gaze-- looked each other in the eye
grinding line-- straight ground transportation.
but do these things warrant a higher score? I know I shouldn't base everything on this rating chart, it's just convenient.
10-Q
replying on Intersection by INTRANSIT
20 Nov 2003, 9:44 AM
Talk to me , sir S. When I fall short of a dozen, it always makes me ask why.
on What I know of monsters by Bachus
20 Nov 2003, 6:16 AM
You know where the problems lie, In the poem. I feel for you bro. I really do.
on Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii
20 Nov 2003, 6:12 AM
awfully close to perfect.
on null by Bill Z Bub
19 Nov 2003, 12:46 PM
is poemranker confused? or has some fusible link fried?
replying on Intersection by INTRANSIT
19 Nov 2003, 12:45 PM
admittedly, the assonance is a bit forced. Poll is also the top of the head.
on Mirror to Mirror by Roisin
19 Nov 2003, 9:17 AM
All green.
on A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus
19 Nov 2003, 6:38 AM
Damian Hurst? Archaeology? Can you help me refine my search sir?
on The Turner Prize by Mona Lisa
19 Nov 2003, 6:11 AM
I like the write. Don't like the topic. You seem to do haikus well.
replying on Captured Moment by hummers86
18 Nov 2003, 6:25 PM
Caducus.
on Captured Moment by hummers86
18 Nov 2003, 6:24 PM
I suggest you read: A cup of tea & some company- By Cadacus
And: Fair 12s' new post.
Then RUN back to the Mall of america from whence you came!!!
And: Fair 12s' new post.
Then RUN back to the Mall of america from whence you came!!!
on A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus
18 Nov 2003, 6:10 PM
Champion.
replying on A girl named Chuck by Shardik
18 Nov 2003, 8:19 AM
yes.