Comments byINTRANSIT, 961–980 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Spuna by <{Baba^Yaga}> 18 Nov 2003, 8:04 AM
Wait, I'll get my wallet. What are the current shares at?
on A girl named Chuck by Shardik 18 Nov 2003, 7:53 AM
Almost Dark Angelican. I think you could add to this. if you wanted.
replying on Truth by eyrbare 18 Nov 2003, 7:49 AM
Finish your website!!! U.W. Barron county eh? Kenosian myself.
We'll be expecting more from you.
replying on I don't like fish by INTRANSIT 17 Nov 2003, 6:26 PM
yes I did. now are you going to stick around and write poetry? or are you going to let paki scare you off again? stop writing in french. it's cheating and I can't vote if I can't read it. I'll get around to learning a second language eventually. now write!
on Truth by eyrbare 17 Nov 2003, 4:40 PM
Actually, do you know what you have here? A factually accurate peek at how humans grow when things turn "cold". Don't touch it.
replying on I Can't Believe You by Katzclear 17 Nov 2003, 4:33 PM
There's no middle ground with you is there? You're either WOT or STOP.
replying on Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz 17 Nov 2003, 4:30 PM
I think I might have seen a pantoum at the art museum today. No, I take that back. It was a Khartoum. I did see Horus though. And I'm more confused than ever. I'll get back to you on the pantoum.
replying on The Poemranker Poe-lease by Jeremi B. Handrinos 17 Nov 2003, 7:16 AM
don't you mean: get down WIT yo' bad self?
on Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz 17 Nov 2003, 6:54 AM
Nah. shorten it to a villanelle for more punch. Judy.
You are by far, the most interesting single serving person I have ever met. Did I say single serving? I meant Full course meal. With a backup bus of Disco retards. Full boat.
on The Balcony Boys by Shardik 17 Nov 2003, 6:39 AM
I have seen, tho' never been to, this Wild Goose you speak of. Will there be more of this story? I hope so.
replying on Common ground. by INTRANSIT 16 Nov 2003, 6:00 PM
no, Bill. that's six letters. welcome back! where ya been?
on The Poemranker Poe-lease by Jeremi B. Handrinos 16 Nov 2003, 1:12 PM
very funny you hooven hooker you. it's good to be hooven. people like hooven animals. as opposed to hoover ones. Ha!
on Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus 16 Nov 2003, 10:01 AM
This is exactly why we like zinnias. they are a hearty flower that can survive winters. And they return to grace us with their beauty every spring. A tree does not hibernate. It improves its root structure during the down season. Just focus on your balcony. All is well in nature.
on I AM... by CHUNMOON 16 Nov 2003, 9:52 AM
yes, no need to shout. 6. show more/ tell less. create some new meatphors.
replying on Hansel & Gratel by ShaNoN+960317485 16 Nov 2003, 9:48 AM
I thought i saw some grammar boo-boos as well. I think she has enough to start with. Let's see how she does.
Yes, Iknow. Accepted. This is the game you do best. This poem, right here. play ball.

Hows the acting going anyway? New leads?
on A Coven of Toes by sixtoedwonder 15 Nov 2003, 12:49 PM
hope you're not superstitious. funny.
replying on Sagittarius by INTRANSIT 15 Nov 2003, 12:45 PM
Settled? Hardly. I'm fighting it as we speak. I've done it for long enough to say: Been there done that, can I move on now?
where do you think that horse poem came from? and the fact that "freedom" is a recurring theme in my poems. Really now. You think I settled? You know me better than that. Or so I'd hoped.
Unfortunately I was unaware of the voting war that was taking place and I inadvertently added to the melee.
I zapped myself a blue zero and a blue four and richa a blue 10 because I honestly belive his poetry right now is better than the two I have on the top list. I am guilty as charged!!!!