replying on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined
13 Nov 2003, 2:17 PM
Your tuners ear is more developed than mine. Grrrr.
on Movie Stars And White Trash Weddings by scitz
13 Nov 2003, 1:56 PM
Capitalize protean? Marshmallow has to go. It's too young. Beyond those, RRRRRoll'em!
on What the fuck is a HAIKU anyway? by titan69
13 Nov 2003, 1:49 PM
The internet has GOBS of samples. Look around.
Do you always stutter? writes
Do you always stutter? writes
replying on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined
13 Nov 2003, 1:46 PM
thanks man. My confidence waxes and wanes faster than the sun and moon in their chase.
(ok, so why wasn't THAT in my bag six hundred poems ago)?
(ok, so why wasn't THAT in my bag six hundred poems ago)?
on Count Spatula by Bachus
13 Nov 2003, 1:20 PM
Not in my dish machine you don't!!!
on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined
13 Nov 2003, 5:39 AM
Sorry nen, this feels forced. Or maybe I'm a simpleton.
replying on Call Vegas!!! by INTRANSIT
12 Nov 2003, 2:16 PM
Assuming there is a shred of truth to the 3 to 1 ratio, I was trying to say men will never be superior as long as we are outnumbered. Cramming it into a haiku, didn't quite work methinks. Thanks, too.
on Me and my 'ompanion by ShaNoN+960317485
12 Nov 2003, 7:04 AM
Walt Whitman fantasizing he's straight and dildoing a girl? What?????? 7 for the strange factor.
replying on Call Vegas!!! by INTRANSIT
12 Nov 2003, 6:55 AM
Thank you. Yes I am impoverished vocabulyricly. I have found poetry to be a fun way to expand myself. I was unaware that this topic was a no-no in the 18th cent. I wasn't trying to impress any kind of emotion with this piece, only trying to raise eyebrows.
Thanks again.
Thanks again.
on God Save The King by Caducus
12 Nov 2003, 6:00 AM
I don't suppose you or I or rockmage, have any Ideas as how to end the war? Well, here's mine. Jam the airlines with americans, hundreds of thousands, send them to Iraq wearing t-shirts that say: I know this war is not going to help, how can I? Or something similar. I know, stupid, radical crazy. Let's spitball.
on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined
10 Nov 2003, 6:23 AM
Call me wierd. I like it as is. It makes sense to me. It's just a request from a reader to a poet for some things. It works. But I don't like (dribble) . trickle , maybe. Dribble makes me think of infirm people.
on Greybie Blue by abecedarian
9 Nov 2003, 7:30 AM
Fuckin' perfect.
on Leg humping is back on the menu by Jeremi B. Handrinos
9 Nov 2003, 6:32 AM
I think the moon was jewish last night. What is the difference between being a racist and having a "severe distaste" for a peoples? Thank you. My eyes are bleeding now. No vote. Well written, however I got nothing from this one. shoot me.
on an early discovery (reworking) by richa
9 Nov 2003, 6:24 AM
For the record, I don't agree with deleting comments. And I don't agree with your wings either. This cut SOUNDS perfect to me and I followed it easily. I think the problem with the springs was you were trying/thinking about compression springs versus extension springs. The only extension springs I can think of are on screen doors and engine throttles. Both bad Ideas for a poem.
on The Birth of an Incubus (Born a child of scorn) by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 5:42 AM
Do something dwith this. A sonnet, 4 quatrains...
Go for 8 syllables per line. Good story. Bumpy rhyme.
Do what it deserves.
Go for 8 syllables per line. Good story. Bumpy rhyme.
Do what it deserves.
on A Succubus Wedding Ceremony by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 5:38 AM
This sounds like a flip on something that goes on in another culture.
replying on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT
6 Nov 2003, 7:36 PM
I'm lookin' at 10gs to in-frame my Fuckliner. Straight 8s gotta wait.
replying on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT
6 Nov 2003, 7:27 PM
if money were no object.....
replying on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT
6 Nov 2003, 7:12 PM
AWWWWW NUTS! The vibe was in the first few drafts. Front drive or rear? Can't find ZEX in my quickly aging tuner mags, though it rings a faint bell. I otter be wrenchin' on top fuelers or something but I screwed up by leaving U.T.I. long ago. weeping.