Comments byINTRANSIT, 1341–1360 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Goldfish in his little bowl by daniella 18 May 2003, 9:29 AM
Hey, whats with stealin' my goldfish mojo, man?
on Be Not Afraid Of Dying. by Mr Pig 18 May 2003, 8:55 AM
Works for me.
on Totem Pole by horus8 18 May 2003, 8:39 AM
gotta run around the poemranker store and play kechup.
on Father's day in Toledo by Shardik 18 May 2003, 8:33 AM
How did this get missed?
hunt down what little fat there is. and burn it off.
Then, frame this fucker.
replying on The windshield-wiper blues by INTRANSIT 17 May 2003, 5:21 PM
ALL RIGHT EVERYBODY!!! THIS IS A FUCK-UP!!!!
THROW YOUR ASSES IN THE AIR OR I'LL BLOW YOUR HANDS AWAY!!!!!

now gimme yer dough.
replying on The windshield-wiper blues by INTRANSIT 17 May 2003, 5:19 PM
True enough. My poetry is better than my lyrics. This will surely become the best thing I have ever written. not.
on A way by Entelechist 17 May 2003, 5:06 PM
I tink ees okay. When you cross the sanity barrier, let me know how the water is would you please?
replying on A way by Entelechist 17 May 2003, 5:04 PM
Maybe you should look up the moniker, then re read.
on My nieghborhood(1) by thepinkbunnyofdoom 17 May 2003, 1:33 PM
rewrite. and concentrate on giving this a beat. it's well done and deserves the attention. tend to it.7 looking for a 9
on Sir John Betjeman is dead Nicholas. by Bachus 2 May 2003, 10:44 AM
going... Going.... GONZO!!!!!
fyi in the world of truckin', the term (good buddy) carries a gay connotation. in the meantime, please send my appendage home.

my apologies sir.
replying on Round Here by asimpleman 30 Apr 2003, 5:55 AM
no. I agree with parts of what you are saying. and yes I read news magazines watch tv and read the paper, which are all at least a little discolored. What I'm saying is that WE drive some of the reasons for war. When we find an alternative to fossil fuel. what will be our excuse then. I still belive we did a lot of good there. it's not over yet though.
replying on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik 30 Apr 2003, 5:42 AM
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a ritual of some kind? freshwater bull sharks. interesting.
we've got northern pike. no match, though you need to use a steel leader to catch'em. and chain mail gloves. and shotgun.
replying on Whales by Jeremi B. Handrinos 30 Apr 2003, 5:37 AM
no it isn't Z. it's the pressure poignt.
replying on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik 29 Apr 2003, 6:55 PM
Tell me, Are these Chilean finned beings cold, or warm blooded?
on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik 29 Apr 2003, 5:14 PM
one more (k) in your moniker and you could be a hemi-pene. what's a whole pene called? does the female get shot-peened? if he loses one, does he get peened off?

i'll stop now.
on Japanese nature. by daniella 29 Apr 2003, 10:02 AM
you better be right. if i cram all that into 17 and it's wrong, i'm gonna come after you. 9. who's backin' you on this?
on The Bored Housewife by Caducus 29 Apr 2003, 6:47 AM
Yes, she's bored. But she's not ready to do anything about it. She needs a dash of frustration methinks.
on kruder&dorfmeister by rockinindividual 29 Apr 2003, 6:38 AM
interesting change-ups. find and alternative for sexy and sultry(cliche) I like the word groovy so I'll let you slide there. rather good