on Leaving Home by temptalia
28 Apr 2003, 6:54 PM
I just wonder why it's not a little higher on the list.
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
28 Apr 2003, 6:29 PM
let me wax mine ears, first.
on Torvald, the Dwarven Toast-Smith by razorgrin
28 Apr 2003, 6:27 PM
I ate cereal. My friend ate: Pork chops, eggs ,bacon, toast, usually. I always got dropped. fun 9
replying on Safe haven by INTRANSIT
28 Apr 2003, 6:12 PM
Maybe one more couplet also?
on Ode to a Sock by JakeBike
28 Apr 2003, 10:51 AM
also proves that inspiration is everywhere.
on Ode to a Sock by JakeBike
28 Apr 2003, 10:49 AM
Sure! Why not. and tributing Dark Angel as well. how fun. coffee fiend? you should be.
replying on Round Here by asimpleman
28 Apr 2003, 6:58 AM
answer me these: Why is it that what I haul is 90% SUV.
And how much petroleum goes into maufacturing a whirl its her?
And how much petroleum goes into maufacturing a whirl its her?
on Nebulous by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Apr 2003, 5:52 PM
you and your big goddamn words...fabolus. 10 for the word alone.
replying on In the hushing silence... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Apr 2003, 5:44 PM
Thanks. Encarta is worthless on poetic details. I dug up some stuff on the net. the info was way over my head and the poems were written in english lettered arabic sooooo. With all due respect, I'm gonna finish tryin' to monkey proper with the villanelle, first.
replying on In the hushing silence... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Apr 2003, 5:27 PM
caint say that I am. this must be....
Care to splain alittle or shall I consult the mighty Encarta?
Care to splain alittle or shall I consult the mighty Encarta?
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
27 Apr 2003, 5:25 PM
even better the third time around!!!
on In the hushing silence... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Apr 2003, 5:18 PM
velly goot. velly nize. Next time, smack me around harder.
on 3am and six cups of coffee gets you nowhere by Blindproject217
27 Apr 2003, 5:48 AM
not bad 'tall
on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
27 Apr 2003, 5:45 AM
I like this better.
on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger
26 Apr 2003, 5:58 AM
Very well re-worded chap. I was a little tired whn I read it the first time. The elimination of the giving up helped alot. I prefer it without the humor, however,YOU thought it fitting. Therefore it has value.
A wise poet said to me: Don't write to make others like your poetry. Write to make them think.
This above all: To thine own self be true.
Shakespeare.
Keep up the efforts, they are paying off.
A wise poet said to me: Don't write to make others like your poetry. Write to make them think.
This above all: To thine own self be true.
Shakespeare.
Keep up the efforts, they are paying off.
on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
26 Apr 2003, 5:47 AM
I'm no haiku expert but I find this quite beautiful. My mind snags the petals on the thorns and they never reach ground though.
replying on Jared Leto & Apocalyptic poetry. by Shardik
25 Apr 2003, 8:07 PM
Aye, the process is worse than the punishment. feel the wallet drain.
In reference to #2: Don't doubt or second guess yourself. Try anyway. You don't KNOW until you get to the end of the thing your're working on. The mere act of trying something new helps you stretch for the next "rung". Also, this is "practicing art"
You can only improve,but you will never reach perfection. Only get to a point with each piece that makes (you) happy. Then up the ante on the next one. Above all else,I believe, have fun.