on Jared Leto & Apocalyptic poetry. by Shardik
25 Apr 2003, 6:32 PM
A MEN!!! no I mean A-MEN no really... they're a-men the best. lemmeseee... HERE it is...Dewie Cheatham and Howe. They're the best!
replying on Landscapes In The Sky by anitawit
25 Apr 2003, 6:20 PM
technically, myriad is collective. I think more proper would be plural or (a) myriad. check with your local dictionary, to be sure.
replying on I Speak of Expanses by anitawit
25 Apr 2003, 6:16 PM
bingo. always read it aloud to yourself or get someone to read it aloud to you. you might feel a little sick but it goes away quickly. And it helps gobs.
on Dear flatulance (dear lord) by Bobjim
25 Apr 2003, 7:05 AM
might I ask why you feel the need to harass this site?
on Landscapes In The Sky by anitawit
25 Apr 2003, 6:49 AM
I think myriad(s). I think when you wrote this, you sat down and wrote without thinking, just wrote. and it works. 8 I think the other is better because you put work into it. both are swell.
on I Speak of Expanses by anitawit
25 Apr 2003, 6:44 AM
Lines 2 and 7 seem a wee off beat. but it's quite enjoyable.
on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger
24 Apr 2003, 5:14 PM
Nice to know you've got a coach. The woodsman part seemed humorous, to me. And the knigdom manager made it seem like you gave up. Just my view. I'm rather blind at the moment.
on Jenny Jones, Jenny Jones by bondjedi
24 Apr 2003, 6:10 AM
Do all of these shows. together.
on isms and ities by Amelia
23 Apr 2003, 2:10 PM
Don't ever stop reaching.....
on suck fucker punch by wordho
23 Apr 2003, 5:49 AM
the short uncapped sentences really bring out the anger/frustration. interesting tool you have there. or lack thereof.
replying on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT
22 Apr 2003, 6:00 PM
What you may see this summer, if you wish, may suprise you.
Thank you much. Monkeys didn't rhyme. Sorry I haven't had time to give yours their due. I still refer to "No descent way".
XOI.
Thank you much. Monkeys didn't rhyme. Sorry I haven't had time to give yours their due. I still refer to "No descent way".
XOI.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
22 Apr 2003, 4:12 PM
If this ever dissappears, I'll die.
on When the Future Comes to Pass by e1ementfire
22 Apr 2003, 6:44 AM
replEnished. A religious Eminem? Liked it anyway.
on The Days Are Dying by anitawit
22 Apr 2003, 6:35 AM
bingo.
replying on Lost and found by INTRANSIT
22 Apr 2003, 6:26 AM
No. but I see the 'semblance. just wanted to float it.
replying on Lost and found by INTRANSIT
21 Apr 2003, 9:51 PM
If people are thinking about that flick, then I would say I've gone awry.
on Noone really knows by CHRMEcountryGRL
21 Apr 2003, 9:23 PM
You need some concrete. To grind off that chrome.