on some deleted poem
5 Nov 2002, 9:44 AM
Me too!! Aint life grand
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 11:17 AM
you would tire quickly, I think.
on The Trail by ThoughtfulSoul
20 Nov 2002, 11:19 AM
Trust not what you see-Go with what you know
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
5 Nov 2002, 9:42 AM
Slick- Did you get mom too
on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl
20 Nov 2002, 10:46 AM
I wonder why people have no friends. Welcome to slam the striving poet night.It is a little difficult to read, but good sentiment. keep writing,lil girl
on Now I Know by BUFFY0BSESSED
20 Nov 2002, 11:02 AM
happiness isn't a gift, it's something you earn. If you can't give it to yourself- no one can force it on you
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2002, 11:14 AM
a path I have seen cleared through the deadfall of my dreams. Excellent imagery.
on Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman
25 Jul 2002, 8:11 PM
I thaught Haiku was 17 syllables. I counted 18.Please correct me if I'm wrong.
on This Strange Feeling by snowing
25 Jul 2002, 8:14 PM
Work on the depth of your language'
Your rhyme scheme is basic, like mine, But I like it
Your rhyme scheme is basic, like mine, But I like it
on some deleted poem
25 Jul 2002, 8:22 PM
Good message. Thanks
on Innocence lost by deadstar
5 Nov 2002, 9:36 AM
Our Future?
on i got a really big fan by Flattop
5 Nov 2002, 9:40 AM
Nice, First comes sometimers, then mosttimers, then alzheimers.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 9:43 PM
Holy Shit. Been There--thank you