replying on The last day of an old year by poetandknowit
4 Mar 2003, 11:12 AM
Ok so where is someplace east of here, I miss seeing it at the top of the charts
on The last day of an old year by poetandknowit
28 Feb 2003, 12:45 AM
Whatever happened to Babitt(sp?)-I miss his work, it had a nice quality about it. Please re-post it, if not I would love to share West of here with some literary friends of mine.
replying on Sisters of mercy by strider1
10 Oct 2002, 11:46 AM
Typos incorporated are proud to associate themselves with this work
replying on Sisters of mercy by strider1
10 Oct 2002, 11:45 AM
Wll all you suckers fell for it-I have proved that you can mainoulate people to do just what you want them to-I have got to the bottom anf now you watch my alter ago go to the top-watch now-its a name that will throw you completely.
replying on Sisters of mercy by strider1
9 Oct 2002, 12:53 PM
No, do you ?
replying on Sisters of mercy by strider1
9 Oct 2002, 12:52 PM
Cheers bud. It takes an intellect to recognise an intellect and I'm beggining to have grudging repsect for you. The insufferable arrogance of human beings to think that Nature was made solely for their benefit, as if it was conceivable that the sun had been set afire merely to ripen men's apples and head their cabbages. What say you Cyrano ?
replying on Sisters of mercy by strider1
9 Oct 2002, 12:39 PM
Do you know what pretentious means? I am not pretending and you may personally welcome anything you like, that's your right as it is mine to stay here and bring you some much needed guidance. This poem is beyond your intellect. The register of the poem is antagonistic, it is meant to be, it is aimed at an audience of intelligence and perception. It is meant to be paradoxical in that the anti-heroine longs for oblivion rather than the stasis and security of being protected against the harshness of life, and yet ultimately realises that in her naivety she has brought this all on herself. Commas, I spit in the face of convention, when was the last time you did ?
replying on Sisters of mercy by strider1
9 Oct 2002, 12:22 PM
Its my poem I'll put commas where I want to, thanks for having the guts to make a comment
on Tugboats by poetandknowit
9 Oct 2002, 12:18 PM
Except whiskey is spelt WHISKY-illiterate american bum
on Tugboats by poetandknowit
9 Oct 2002, 12:17 PM
Damn, damn, damn , and dmanation-I like this, no-I do, this is good-10/10
on father Worked Nights by poetandknowit
9 Oct 2002, 12:15 PM
no wait its sardonic humour
on father Worked Nights by poetandknowit
9 Oct 2002, 12:14 PM
Whilst mother copulated with the stray dogs no doubt, using her grecian urn as a receiver-you can do batter(sic) than this-3/10
on Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom
9 Oct 2002, 12:02 PM
Trouble is you are just a tick and tock poet tart. This made me think for the first time today. Is this idiot for real or is he trying to say something a little bit deep. I think I get it-he's lonely and he wants to make a joke of it and make himself feel better-its cathartic-so as I am not an unreasonable bastard-8/10. Try again when you have a life pal.
on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
9 Oct 2002, 11:45 AM
Shades of Wordsworth here, glittering and glinting so close together give me a bit of a problem. Armour-are you American trying to be English or just using the correct spellig ? This deserves to be here-well done -9/10
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
9 Oct 2002, 11:10 AM
life-typo
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
9 Oct 2002, 11:09 AM
Why would you want to severely criticise the sun, the giver of life ? You also use a lot of " ands" are you ralted to babitt-he uses them a lot to-dead language pilgrim-get a live. I liked the ending it made me laugh, you may have potential, get over yourself first, you are in denial. 7/10