on HATE by Blade
4 Nov 2002, 2:27 AM
Er, kind of good, but you're beginning to freak me out now...
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
29 Oct 2002, 12:50 PM
And you, sir, are a guttersnipe of the first order! How dare you mock one such as myself over such a piddling, trivial affair? Have at you!!!!!!!!
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
29 Oct 2002, 2:07 AM
Never mind - ta muchly, anyway! Oh, and DA can shut his/her mouth - either say something worth saying, or keep schtum, pal!
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
28 Oct 2002, 2:56 PM
As my prize, then, can you this time tell me (or anyone else kind or naive enough) tell me what 'LOL' means. I'm at a loose end when it comes to dealing with text-talk or whatever it's called!
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
28 Oct 2002, 2:37 PM
Clever layout and succinctly put. I agree with zzinnia66, this is one of your best. Good stuff! :)
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
28 Oct 2002, 2:35 PM
What are you, some kind of serial pervert?
replying on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles
28 Oct 2002, 10:40 AM
Nicely done! Submit that one, it rocks!
on Heart of the killer by UAFANTHORPEY
28 Oct 2002, 5:46 AM
Wow! A few typos, but otherwise, well, erm...wow! Spot on!!! :)
replying on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird
26 Oct 2002, 4:47 AM
Why do you think they have trunks? No, wait, sorry, I've gone too far...
on Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe
25 Oct 2002, 8:30 AM
Nicely done!
replying on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird
25 Oct 2002, 5:07 AM
Cheers to the both of you, and thanks for overlooking the typo in line 7 - the last word, 'phase' should actually read as 'phrase'. Just thought I'd clear that one up now.
on The First Poem by jrtails
25 Oct 2002, 3:36 AM
Nice one, tails - SAFE, MATE!!!!
on The Morris Minor Rap by rosiebailey
25 Oct 2002, 2:41 AM
Another deserving case for Care In The Community, it seems. Still, pretty bloody funny!
I've just read them, and I'm on the fence as regards my view. I see the point you and others have that people should accept the fact that if they're going to put up their work for ranking, they should accept all reviews, good or bad. However, I also see some sense in what Maria and co. are saying, and I feel that it's pointless just to slate something without giving some constructive criticism. In other words, saying something is crap is fine, just say why, and give a few pointers on how to do better next time. Regardless of ability, we're all here to improve, and it would be much better if we were supportive of fellow poets, and helped them to progress, rather than slamming them for the sake of it (although I must admit these skirmishes make for excellent reading!). Ok, rant over!
There's nothing wrong with being pedantic - it's just attention to detail. Oh, and could somebody explain the feud between Blade, Tintagiles and Maria - every poem one of them has written seems to be followed up by a slanging match from the other two. What's all that about?!?!
on Flamin Monkey's by Blade
23 Oct 2002, 6:55 AM
Dude, what have you been smoking?
Pretty good, though, and the scantion isn't too bad either!
Pretty good, though, and the scantion isn't too bad either!