on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 5:19 AM
Hmmmmmmm.
on A Well Worth Wait by savannah
22 Oct 2002, 5:18 AM
Nice and uncomplicated.
on Truths by Nicholas Jones
23 Oct 2002, 4:10 AM
This irritates me as a subject. There is nothing wrong with being middle class. You find we run many of the businesses and companies employing the worker. Without middle class financial investment the economy would completely collapse. Now the aristocracy, they contribute nothing to economy. Yet we must preserve them as it part of (my) culture. Other than that it is sound.
on Truths by Nicholas Jones
23 Oct 2002, 4:17 AM
Also, socialism only works in heavan where it's not needed and hell where it's already working. Obvioulsy the awful 60 years of communism in Russia and the Eastern Bloc and the slow return to captitalism by China, Vietnam and Cuba mean nothing? Socialism just leads to oppression because with evryone being the same, the need to be better is only intensified.
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 4:24 AM
I do like this. Very frivolous, in a good way. (I think frivolous can be construed ina bad way). Oh I do so like using long words, makes me feel Jovial, Jocular and Gay. (we don't use that word for its true meaning enough).
on one man opponent by chinstrap
23 Oct 2002, 4:07 AM
I don't think it needs an exclamation mark. It was going really well untill the last line, 'he is a winner!' just trivializes it I'm afraid.
on Daniela by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 5:12 AM
Oh, come on. Forgiveness ring a bell? Get over yourself! People take themselves far too seriously these days.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 5:13 AM
Well worth the patience of reading this. A commendable effort which is very retrospective.
on Love by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 5:14 AM
Quite average actually. No depth of character or history. Could be anything which in some cases is good, but here it's just vague.
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
22 Oct 2002, 5:15 AM
Well, Its a funny reflection on teen life. A little blunt and insensitive, but I guess thats us teenagers! Good
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 5:20 AM
Ver amusing.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 5:21 AM
Another winner there Mr. Cat. Your use of visual aids is original. Why should a poem be about words?
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 5:22 AM
I see a theme running here. A commendable effort again!
on Body Language by Ninoy_Instigator
22 Oct 2002, 5:38 AM
Good.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 5:18 AM
Too long.
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 4:19 AM
Odd