poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Jill Stockinger (181-200) and replies

Comments byJill Stockinger, 181–200 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Smile by feelinglistless 14 Jul 2002, 3:04 PM
A bit cliched, but still nice!
Jill S.
on Forever Untitled. by LucidRevelation 14 Jul 2002, 3:03 PM
Not bad! Jill S.
on She moves by Oddsboy 14 Jul 2002, 3:02 PM
I liked the first 4 lines only.
Rest did not hang together well
enough.
on Compassion by Kashi 14 Jul 2002, 3:01 PM
Don't believe in angels or God but the poem was pretty well written.
on Love at 4 A.M. by x311 14 Jul 2002, 2:59 PM
Too cliched, not very well written.
on The beggar in me by dilips_10 14 Jul 2002, 2:58 PM
I liked it.
on Garden by ifni 14 Jul 2002, 2:57 PM
Liked it muchly! Cute use of metaphor.
on MY BURNING RAGE by MEMORIES 14 Jul 2002, 2:56 PM
Intense. Some cliches, but it
felt heartfelt.
on Live My Death by Rich Clark 14 Jul 2002, 2:54 PM
I am guessing you are talking of glaucoma or blindness, not metaphorically.
Made me think. Jill S.
on Untitled Sonnet #1 by Antwon 14 Jul 2002, 2:49 PM
Too many cliches.
on Something New by feelinglistless 14 Jul 2002, 2:47 PM
Too similar to others I have read.
on My Tongue ..... and God by BadPoet 14 Jul 2002, 2:44 PM
Sweet, silly.
on Untitled #2 by LucidRevelation 14 Jul 2002, 2:43 PM
Good! Jill S.
on Spring Haiku by Staika 14 Jul 2002, 2:43 PM
Tear and spear don't work as
being analagous enough, for me.
Jill S. I LOVE "like a heron spearing fish in the cold spring dusk."
on loki's end by yarlgrenn 14 Jul 2002, 2:40 PM
Good strong imagery. I liked it.
Jill S.
on lost by mitchski 14 Jul 2002, 2:39 PM
Liked the last stanza, it stands alone better than mixed in with the not-as-well written rest of poem.
on Anger Management by wlshepherd 14 Jul 2002, 2:37 PM
Seems pretty obvious- but you are "telling" not showing, which does
not make it very good poetry. Clear thought though.
on A clearer lucidity by Eric Johnson 14 Jul 2002, 2:30 PM
Some good lines- strange use of commas, though.
on My Heart Has Trembled by TomKWS 14 Jul 2002, 2:24 PM
Great last line.
on Jericho by goldfish 14 Jul 2002, 2:20 PM
First line equating ships-plural-with one dove, singular,bothered
me a little tho I guess you mean all in a formation created a sight of "one body." Liked how you kept rhyme going, many good images. Jill S.