on Math Poem 2 by Dovina
26 Dec 2004, 5:50 PM
cuter
on some deleted poem
31 Dec 2004, 8:37 AM
I can't help it. I'm a fan of fins. -10-
on Math Poem 3 by Dovina
2 Jan 2005, 7:19 AM
I'm sorry, Miss Dovina. The dog ate my math homework.
on Poetic Profit by Dovina
3 Jan 2005, 8:13 PM
Hey, I like this guy. He and I could sing a couple of good old country songs togther. "He Stopped Loving Her Today," "Didn't Know God Made Honky Tonk Angels" and the like. Was he drinking an American Brew? I prefer a dark beer myself with plenty of salty nuts.
on What I Do Know by PsydewaysTears
3 Jan 2005, 8:17 PM
Ah! There's nothing like getting your little head to pop one off first thing in the morning to let you know you're still alive.
on some deleted poem
3 Jan 2005, 8:24 PM
I love the last line's planned ambiguity. I agree. Who the hell needs them? Good poem. Aisle ketch U laider.
on Ode To Sweet Susie Chee by Bachus
4 Jan 2005, 7:45 AM
Ditto!
on Cigarettes and Masturbation by Lifeboatman
4 Jan 2005, 7:53 AM
Listen to the Surgeon and take your Zantac 75.
on Dying In The Corner by Zalev
4 Jan 2005, 7:57 AM
Clever.
on Uncertainty by nentwined
4 Jan 2005, 8:47 AM
Man, you are in dire need of a tea party. Great!
on Ghostly Rememberance by Beyond_Dreams
6 Jan 2005, 7:28 PM
Yep. They can really shove your meat into the freezer when it suits 'em. -8-
on some deleted poem
4 Jan 2005, 7:09 PM
Golly, S. It's been so long since I've had the option of choosing sides that I sleep wherever I happen to pass out from the booze (floor, couch, computer desk or the usual-- bathroom). I mean, if I have to choose something, I'll choose top over bottom 8 nights a week. Good read -9- I'm a fan of bedtime.
on The Saddest Part by MacFrantic
6 Jan 2005, 7:20 PM
I like this
and that's the saddest part.
and that's the saddest part.
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2005, 8:29 AM
I see the problem uphill/will (2 beats/1 beat)
then now/allow (1 beat/2 beats). I guess it has to do with the stresses.
then now/allow (1 beat/2 beats). I guess it has to do with the stresses.
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2005, 7:25 PM
Cool idea. I can't get past the 'will' in 8th line. I think it would flow better without it. Even so, at least a -9-.
on Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina
12 Jan 2005, 11:13 PM
-10- The 'preverts' in line 13 is sheer genius. The only improvement I would add might be to change the last word from ball to balls.
on Goldmunds Slut Fiasco. by SupremeDreamer
15 Jan 2005, 11:37 AM
A verbal Degas in his late period. Quite withering.
on Rendered Genderless by PsydewaysTears
16 Jan 2005, 10:19 AM
Overstated but real as a cheeseburger and a milkshake-9-.