on DEATH by celticskatermatt1
6 Dec 2004, 9:09 AM
Did you mean "strick?"
on All About Mistakes by travelingsk8er
6 Dec 2004, 9:13 AM
How can she walk away if she's on skates?
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2004, 9:15 AM
Love the idea. Maybe a serious re-write in the future?
on Recognition by nentwined
7 Dec 2004, 8:00 AM
Makes me want to stand up in a room full of poets and say, "Hi. My name is Dan. I'm a poem-holic."
on some deleted poem
12 Dec 2004, 5:11 AM
I believe that the goal of great poets should be to appeal to everyone equally. I hope this edit accomplishes that goal for this poem, my brothers in words.
on some deleted poem
12 Dec 2004, 5:22 AM
Sounds like love is a game of penny-ante poker with God as the dealer and the queen trumps the king everytime.
on That One Time Last Summer, Remember? by jessicazee
12 Dec 2004, 5:26 AM
Ditto
on I Have... by SupremeDreamer
12 Dec 2004, 5:45 AM
Preaching to the choir-Amen.
on Better Sex by Dovina
15 Dec 2004, 7:28 AM
You are a good girl and should submit this poem to Junior Scholastic Magazine.
on some deleted poem
13 Dec 2004, 8:19 AM
I GOT THE POWER!!!!!!
on Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina
13 Dec 2004, 8:58 AM
After watching a baseball game or two, I thought that at the beginning of the action the empire shouted, "Play Balls!" So the players aren't supposed to...uh...you know?
On a completely different subject I discovered a cool 'x' on the lower right-hand corner of the comment box. You can delete comments made by annoying asstrological signers by left-clicking the 'x.' It is part of the "freedom of speech" philosophy on poemranker. You have the right to say anything you want to me in comments. I have the right to delete comments. "America, what a country!" J. Smirnoff
On a completely different subject I discovered a cool 'x' on the lower right-hand corner of the comment box. You can delete comments made by annoying asstrological signers by left-clicking the 'x.' It is part of the "freedom of speech" philosophy on poemranker. You have the right to say anything you want to me in comments. I have the right to delete comments. "America, what a country!" J. Smirnoff
on some deleted poem
14 Dec 2004, 8:26 AM
I hope reality is all you hope it will be, I.
on You and Me at Boulder Lake by jessicazee
14 Dec 2004, 8:57 AM
Haven't been camping for 40 years but this resonates. It is one of 'those' moments that can happen anywhere when you are with 'that' person. Here in LA it could happen at the Mark Taper, in S.F at 'the baths' or in Texas at a barbeque. It needs a bit of tightening to be a -10-.
If you lose the last line, it does paint a picture.
My roomate's ex girlfriend tried to come on to me during a ski trip in West Virginia. She slept in my hotel room on the other bed.
My cell phone has more recent outgoing calls than incoming. My buddy list is filled with people I do not know.
My roomate's ex girlfriend tried to come on to me during a ski trip in West Virginia. She slept in my hotel room on the other bed.
My cell phone has more recent outgoing calls than incoming. My buddy list is filled with people I do not know.
on Forsaken Love by Blue Magpie
15 Dec 2004, 7:40 AM
It rhymes, huh?
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2004, 7:04 PM
It's blues. It rhymes. It has meter. It lacks the tension and release of a good lyric. I'm sure if you think about it a bit more, you could make the story move from the fire to the damage it has caused someone.
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2004, 8:49 AM
Almost -10-