poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Caducus (261-280)

Comments byCaducus, 261–280 back. Include replies

on Grind by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2003, 3:16 AM
This is my kinda thing and as a writer of death, graves and balh blah blah i give you maximum respect on this one. I'm tenning ya baby !
on Grind by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2003, 3:17 AM
oh yeah ! By the way the name please of the grandfather clock (ripping its guts out poem please????)

I took everything I had
and put it underground to decay,
and welcomed the invisible world.
A world of the unseen vitamin,
where thoughts become the
granules of life.
Where dirt is edible and tastes
like the sun.
on Second Sight by Nitroxide 27 Nov 2003, 3:19 AM
typo line 2.

Admirable sentiment, this if more concise could pack a harder punch, nevertheless i liked where you went with it.7
on The man of steel by <{Baba^Yaga}> 12 Dec 2003, 1:51 PM
sour kraut yolk - ewww
on Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom 12 Dec 2003, 1:53 PM
ahh yes my wise rabbit !
on some deleted poem 12 Dec 2003, 1:54 PM
Line 9 - loved it

Infact i'll even stay behind and clap the damn orchestra --8
on some deleted poem 12 Dec 2003, 1:55 PM
don't care what this is about it hit something shallow and landed on deep.
on What I really needed by Shardik 12 Dec 2003, 1:58 PM
I think i know what your're wrting of here.

Dad?

You don't have to conceal to reveal - however i love this for its fragility and pride.

I'm moved 10
on Use Me by dragonfly 12 Dec 2003, 2:01 PM
Loved the opening but s2 ruined the feeling - damn ! You have potential and i'd love to see a more concise version. If you open as strongly as this you must close as strong (or more) 7
on some deleted poem 12 Dec 2003, 2:02 PM
2 - unfair man !

This is a glammed up thought process but the end intrigues me. 6
on A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus 12 Dec 2003, 2:05 PM
Wow i was number 2 for 49 mins. I must find that romanian vintage.
on Death & the Twisted Tree by SupremeDreamer 12 Dec 2003, 2:06 PM
Wild - I love it

Good show.
on The Glint by peaceseeker 12 Dec 2003, 2:10 PM
Though I dislike your attitude I must say a 4 is unfair.

I actually think this shows a side to of you I like and the word play is good. TAstes like diamonds I don't get?

________8________
on She is A Lover Deep Within by Joe-joe 12 Dec 2003, 2:12 PM
For your young years you are a fine writer.

I am mr pig too joe joe.
on The wise by richa 31 Dec 2003, 6:01 AM
of a half-formed thought,
just the uneven lines of
every faked smile.

This made me feel how aging is a complete waste of time if this is the case.

Classy.
on some deleted poem 31 Dec 2003, 6:04 AM
I was just thinking how much mine, yours and so many others poetry styles have changed since i discovered p/r.

Still find a feast of ideas from you, p/r is one cruel mofu of a site but the fruits come with buds after a while.
on Chaos & his dreamchild (genesis) --Revised Edition-- by SupremeDreamer 31 Dec 2003, 6:07 AM
Liked it, one reason i did was because it has at least 2 parts it can be ended with an impact.

Loved the 1st 3 big time.
on Anvil man by INTRANSIT 31 Dec 2003, 6:09 AM
Excellent title.
This could have been quite tedious but your a wordsmith meister and i have to say mr intransit....this is one of your best. (in my op) 10

deserves hits.
on some deleted poem 31 Dec 2003, 6:12 AM
not sure about the begining but the rest festoons like tinsel.

The beginning seems clumsy and i think i'm being cruel to mr potato head because that dude don't belong in a poem.

I'm warming to him. 8
on some deleted poem 2 Jan 2004, 10:53 AM
yes yes and yes

see my recent suggestion.

also check this out: http://poetry.tetto.org/index.php?target=read&number=857