on an early discovery (reworking) by richa
23 Nov 2003, 5:43 AM
someone who deserves the top my friend 10
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2003, 3:11 AM
S3 = Z ? , are you richa?
Hmm Commudus, can you imagine Nero? he would be in Stringfellows permanently.
Wrapped up wel and draped in class
Hmm Commudus, can you imagine Nero? he would be in Stringfellows permanently.
Wrapped up wel and draped in class
on Murder means oil for Bush's coffer by DreamerSupreme
24 Nov 2003, 3:13 AM
More of a rant than a poem, however I can rant and this for the most part flows like still nudes to the eye. 7
on Mecca was mud in my backyard by Y2kSlamPoet
24 Nov 2003, 3:18 AM
I have to say it's been agres since i last read you and in that time you have evolved in to a good writer with a modern style to drag poetry in to the year of your user name. S2-4 are exquisite. Here's a midas number :-) Happy to see poemranker making reasons for nentwined to be happy that he's creating good poems.
Group hugs everyone
Group hugs everyone
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2003, 3:23 AM
This poem is like a soft porn movie. I want to see these writing talents you have and the love. I want to read your poetic translations of love but where are they? Give me it all I've paid in full and not sneaked in round the back
on Ode to my Poopy by Samantha
24 Nov 2003, 3:24 AM
Dark Angel will sue over this
on Teenage Guidance by Shit-Crumpets
24 Nov 2003, 3:25 AM
fucking right- 9
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2003, 3:29 AM
Love the subtlety and comparisons in S2. Line 2 seems to need something as to me it stuttered which served as a weaker link to very strong links. (Just chokes the flow in L2). Your a master at themes and nature and this is a fine addition to your work. 8
on Pinches by peaceseeker
24 Nov 2003, 3:31 AM
Some interesting lines but it's FUBAR in many places, seperate in to stanzas the changes of direction and that will not terrorize the eyes so much. - no vote yet
on Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT
24 Nov 2003, 7:36 AM
Patina - cool word like it
Thes people are fused by self = typo in line
Found this absorbin i/t ! I know i'm looking in to this too deep but the line - high class in to deep atlantic made me think.
High class people are deemed to be shallow, cold water is deep, can you find the antonym?
Other than that it was all hits in the right places and it's a very layered poem - 8 = B+ = :0)
Thes people are fused by self = typo in line
Found this absorbin i/t ! I know i'm looking in to this too deep but the line - high class in to deep atlantic made me think.
High class people are deemed to be shallow, cold water is deep, can you find the antonym?
Other than that it was all hits in the right places and it's a very layered poem - 8 = B+ = :0)
on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik
26 Nov 2003, 3:50 PM
Haiku? Who cares it shines like snow man ....10 and a personal favourite of mine.
on The Boxer by DreamerSupreme
27 Nov 2003, 1:58 AM
Liked the Picasso reference in S1 and the unrelenting mood of violence you have created, makes me want to kill the bastard.
Good stuff
Good stuff
on An Angel from Venice Disappears by DreamerSupreme
27 Nov 2003, 2:00 AM
I've been checking your vote archives and from what i see, someone is zeroing you out of petty revenge.
At least I know your better than that.
At least I know your better than that.
on Supercharged by Nicholas Jones
27 Nov 2003, 3:10 AM
L3 makes this ! 8
on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2003, 3:12 AM
swell
on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer
27 Nov 2003, 3:13 AM
says what a haiku does , a haiku about a haiku - novel idea 7
on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2003, 3:14 AM
Some nice imagery but overlong 6
Werewolving my tears
back at the moon. I race through thickening
changings and habits too sooned.
class !