poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Caducus (301-320)

Comments byCaducus, 301–320 back. Include replies

on Battle of the brains by INTRANSIT 14 Oct 2003, 3:29 PM
Wow shorter than a haiku and speaking as loud with less - impressed - maybe we could have a new category called >>>>>>>>> Shorts 8
on Turncoat by poetandknowit 14 Oct 2003, 3:31 PM
Please explain the last 2 lines.
on some deleted poem 14 Oct 2003, 3:33 PM
Are you feeling okay? I only found the use of anus once
I have seen these bastards in the cinema and felt like sliting there throats with the stale popcorn they sell. On my last visit to the Odeon I heard someone groaning and told them to shut the fuck up, on my exit i realized the person i shouted at was in a wheelchair - still fair treatment to all lol.
on some deleted poem 15 Oct 2003, 9:47 AM
God i love this like grannys gravy -9-

Never knew someone could jar ya

on falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa 24 Oct 2003, 6:40 AM
poemranker support : 9

You're a leader richard
on My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit 25 Oct 2003, 3:45 AM
My thoughts are more like drop and splash.

I cracked up when i saw it because for a moment i thought it would be your life story.
blue collar beaten. 1st half was real ass kicker.

please help me with syllable's h ! and read my haiku just posted. i have the ideas but understand women more than syllables.
on Tiddles Breathes his Last by scitz 29 Oct 2003, 9:24 AM
lol
on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2003, 7:00 AM
a poem that really brings to life the poem and shouts its point across from start to crescendo.

i liked it and its the best you've written in my opinion 9
on God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> 6 Nov 2003, 7:01 AM
heaven is line 5
on God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> 6 Nov 2003, 7:02 AM
put a dash between k and mart for the english - we just think kmart is NYC street slang otherwise.
on Fathers by amielou82 6 Nov 2003, 7:05 AM
just when i started liking it i hated the next line and so on and so on- bit too preachy and a warm earl grey.
on The wild runs by ShaNoN+960317485 6 Nov 2003, 7:09 AM
full marks fo rthe use of gobbledygook
on The Thrapper by You are a fat fucker 6 Nov 2003, 7:10 AM
Shades of dark angel
on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2003, 7:11 AM
not bad but how the hell can you hold on to a scar? a scar is embedded
on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2003, 7:15 AM
Don't get some of it but line 5 mesmerized me.

fealty is an interesting word choice.
on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2003, 7:20 AM
true as any touch? that makes me think about how true we really are, especially considering recent events in my life.

Is every touch really true?
on Call Vegas!!! by INTRANSIT 11 Nov 2003, 4:01 PM
tee he he
on Boxes by INTRANSIT 19 Nov 2003, 4:18 AM
try damien hurst and you'll make yourself blled from scratching.

very true point.