on Dust by Caducus
2 Dec 2002, 3:12 PM
I really enjoyed this...merely a nearly...love that line
on two poles are better than one by <~>
26 Nov 2002, 10:42 AM
This was wonderful
on Small Town Snow by OneFingerAnswer
25 Nov 2002, 8:24 PM
you must be from my city! I like it...dead on description of small towns
on Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria
25 Nov 2002, 4:12 PM
I liked the last two poems of yours, but really....you can do better than this
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
19 Nov 2002, 6:09 PM
This is pretty cool....
on confused by little_angel_maria
19 Nov 2002, 6:01 PM
I can tell you are sad so I hate to say this, but I think you stole a line from Nights in White Satin by the Moody Blues....people tell me thoughts they cannot defend....Plus s4 reminds me of a Pink song.... Hazard to Myself I think is the one.
on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl
19 Nov 2002, 4:51 PM
I like this. It makes me think about my own "sisters"
on The Breathing Dead by Caducus
19 Nov 2002, 8:38 AM
This is sad...i love the first two lines
replying on missing you by Goose
19 Nov 2002, 8:28 AM
I agree with you. Thanks for the input. I have dropped those last two lines and I like it lots better.
replying on Boy I Know by Goose
18 Nov 2002, 1:56 PM
Hmmm...interesting viewpoint. I was actually agreeeing with you. When I wrote something that "smacks of judgment" I was opening myself up to be judged. You are entertaining to listen to though. I appreciate the feedback.
on Faith... by loneshadow29
18 Nov 2002, 1:13 PM
I like it !
replying on Boy I Know by Goose
18 Nov 2002, 12:54 PM
As your husband wrote in the greatest of all books...Judge not lest ye be judged.