on Fuck by Bobjim
15 Jan 2003, 5:22 AM
NOOOOO! The last line isn't complete!
on Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim
15 Jan 2003, 5:24 AM
What the fuck? Who is that?
on (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined
15 Jan 2003, 5:43 AM
By the by, what time is it over there?
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 5:47 AM
Pretty good. The other one you just submitted was better, but still I like this quite a bit. 2nd to last stanza rocks.
You probably don't need advice from a teenager, however I am going to say that the third stanza doesn't totally fit in with the more ethereal atmosphere of the rest of it...however it all depends on what sort of people this is aimed at.
Don't let that detract from the fact that this is very good! 8
You probably don't need advice from a teenager, however I am going to say that the third stanza doesn't totally fit in with the more ethereal atmosphere of the rest of it...however it all depends on what sort of people this is aimed at.
Don't let that detract from the fact that this is very good! 8
on Dexpression by Roisin
15 Jan 2003, 5:53 AM
Ye-es. Not sure what to make of this...maybe another read will do it justice.
on Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim
15 Jan 2003, 5:32 AM
Also, were you intending I vote for this?
on Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim
15 Jan 2003, 5:33 AM
Out of curiosity, why is his head seperated from his body? Surely that's gonna hurt...
on Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man
15 Jan 2003, 5:34 AM
No, he chewed it off.
And by the way, he does mean to offend everybody. Especially you.
Funny poem, though.
And by the way, he does mean to offend everybody. Especially you.
Funny poem, though.
on killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined
15 Jan 2003, 5:37 AM
Fabulous! Psychedelic Butterflies will remember this in one of our songs!!!! Wheeee!!!!! Heeheeheehee!
I like this so much it may have a ten! Foom!!
I like this so much it may have a ten! Foom!!
on Welsh Landscape Part One by Nicholas Jones
15 Jan 2003, 5:39 AM
I like Catatonia.
on (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined
15 Jan 2003, 5:39 AM
Must I ignore?
on Playing Jerry and crap by w~* ATHENA *~w
15 Jan 2003, 5:40 AM
Nurk.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 5:42 AM
Mr Tintagiles, she may have been tripping in the woods, but you've been tripping at your computer! Acid abounds etc.
Wonderful poem. 9
Wonderful poem. 9
on alienheart by Bill Z Bub
15 Jan 2003, 1:05 AM
This poem seriously rocks, however I'm not 100 per cent sure that the TV references etc do work-even so, I can't really see anything else working so all I can say is "nice one!". 9
on insomnia by Bill Z Bub
14 Jan 2003, 6:34 AM
Yeah, I like this-it's very good!
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 6:14 AM
Quite.
on Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim
15 Jan 2003, 5:31 AM
No, the question was *who*?
on (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined
15 Jan 2003, 5:35 AM
Yes, this works.
on Where is My BabyGirl? by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
14 Jan 2003, 6:38 AM
I thought this was crap until I read the last line of it (the poem, not the bit at the bottom). It really hit me-I don't know why, but still I will give you a nine.