on some deleted poem
2 Jan 2003, 12:36 PM
Reminds me of a day...
on some deleted poem
4 Jan 2003, 5:21 AM
Beautiful...like a cricket bat.
on some deleted poem
4 Jan 2003, 5:27 AM
This takes the piss out of Blade, which instantly guarantees it a 5, otherwise a few good images, have 6, now can I have a lollipop too?
on some deleted poem
3 Jan 2003, 11:56 AM
Ah yes, well may Icarus be proud of ye, for ye have opened the skies of poetry to those without wings and shown them how to soar...what am I saying?
Great poem, definately worth a 9
(What's the 'curmudgeon'?)
Great poem, definately worth a 9
(What's the 'curmudgeon'?)
on unsent by Bill Z Bub
2 Jan 2003, 12:33 PM
If this is your writing getting worse, show me some of your best.
on My Friend? by Blade
2 Jan 2003, 1:25 PM
We give him all the help that we can. They're called 'tranquilisers'.
on IRONSHOE by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
2 Jan 2003, 12:38 PM
Har har har! Have a ten, you continue to amuse me, Dark Angel...just one question-who's Ironshoe in reality?
on The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) by <~>
2 Jan 2003, 12:39 PM
Yes, wonderful news.
on some deleted poem
2 Jan 2003, 12:41 PM
Hee ho hum...marvellous...you are a comic genius, goodbye
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 11:50 AM
Oh yes...damn, need to change my trousers again har har.
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 11:35 AM
Why do you feel the need to copyright this? And why do you need question marks in front of you copyright? Why?
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 11:36 AM
Wasn't she writing about you Settle?
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 11:46 AM
No, this is really good. The line, "a few chosen words with the warmth of May" is brilliant.
How about somethinglike "The wonder of her eyes/Will always hypnotise/I'm trapped inside her gaze/Caught in her subtle ways/My defences soon break/The world becomes opaque" to go after the first two lines of the last stanza.
That being said, it works without. Anyhoo, happy new year you all people.
How about somethinglike "The wonder of her eyes/Will always hypnotise/I'm trapped inside her gaze/Caught in her subtle ways/My defences soon break/The world becomes opaque" to go after the first two lines of the last stanza.
That being said, it works without. Anyhoo, happy new year you all people.
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 11:48 AM
Fair enough, I was just curious. Um, I don't mean to sound like I'm nitpicking here, but should the first line have an extra word before " ...so much"? Still, not a bad poem.
on Fortune cookie by INTRANSIT
3 Jan 2003, 8:45 AM
Lovely
on some deleted poem
3 Jan 2003, 12:04 PM
Settle, you trickster, you've done it again! Changed a poem so the comments relate to it in no way whatsoever! I love your thinking, man!
Actually, this made me laugh quite a bit, have a nine now stop anonymously voting zeros!
Actually, this made me laugh quite a bit, have a nine now stop anonymously voting zeros!
Alternatively, "Am I Still Pissed?"