poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Ranger (1421-1440)

Comments byRanger, 1421–1440 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 20 Dec 2002, 6:23 PM
What the fuck's going on? This isn't the poem I responded to above. You sneaky devil, Settle...
on Junk by Bonehiss 20 Dec 2002, 1:48 PM
Quite good-possibly better as a lyric?
on some deleted poem 23 Dec 2002, 12:26 PM
I assume you read Edgar Allen Poe...no don't worry, just me trying to be clever...this is very good, very good indeed...particularly enjoyed the second stanza...nice work, 9
on some deleted poem 23 Dec 2002, 12:27 PM
Sorry, I meant I enoyed the third stanza (the second's good too), my brain's not quite in tune with my eyes...hmm
on Foreplay by INTRANSIT 23 Dec 2002, 12:31 PM
Hee hee, excellent poem, love the bit near the end ("To consume you endlessly...") 9/10
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros 22 Dec 2002, 5:09 AM
Damn it, it didn't work.
on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 5:17 AM
Brilliant.
on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 4:51 AM
Yes, but don't tell anyone...shh
on some deleted poem 22 Dec 2002, 4:54 AM
Marvellous, almost feel it deserves a ten...but that's just the reply I'm talking about.
Are you Blade in disguise? No, Blade's not that cunning...
on missing time by Bill Z Bub 22 Dec 2002, 4:59 AM
Ah yes, possibly the best work today...have a nine.
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros 22 Dec 2002, 5:08 AM
Dear God. I would give this a zero but that would risk you replacing Blade at the bottom. Instead I think I shall give it a ten, which will hopefully lift you out of the bottom fifteen so we NEVER HAVE TO SEE THIS PILE OF SHITE AGAIN!
And breathe.
on some deleted poem 20 Dec 2002, 1:50 PM
Good stuff, Master B.
on some deleted poem 20 Dec 2002, 4:11 AM
Aaaarrrggghhhh, watch out, Red_Neck's about to submit another one! Hide away everybody!
(Merry Christmas once again!)
on the feeling was never there by blackball 20 Dec 2002, 4:15 AM
Not bad, my friend, not bad at all. I like the line "praying for a moment..."
8/10
on some deleted poem 20 Dec 2002, 4:25 AM
Oh wow, this is superb! I really love the last stanza-have a ten!

Merry Christmas and a happy New Year!
on pee haiku by New Life Drug 20 Dec 2002, 4:26 AM
Bugger, I'm agreeing with poetandknowit! This is incredible, thank you NLD!
on March by <~> 20 Dec 2002, 4:29 AM
Good stuff! Definately a 9, can't decide if it's enough for a ten...sod it, 10
on Baby Soup by w~* ATHENA *~w 20 Dec 2002, 4:04 AM
If you're going to steal REM's lyrics, please at least try to disguise them. Even better, DON'T STEAL THEM AT ALL!
on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 22 Dec 2002, 5:04 AM
This is good, very good. 10
on some deleted poem 20 Dec 2002, 4:18 AM
Well now...