| Re: Cocky by Goose |
26-Nov-02/1:06 AM |
Bachus: Error line 1-'AN Sagittarius' should be 'A Sagittarius'
Decent poem.
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| Re: Maliced flame by T'ien |
26-Nov-02/1:04 AM |
Actually, considering the state of mind he's in right now, I think it sums up everything pretty well.
It needs a bit of work, but hey, so does almost everything
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| Re: a comment on The North Wind by Ranger |
26-Nov-02/1:01 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The North Wind by Ranger |
25-Nov-02/8:15 AM |
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Hell yeah...kinda. For a wannabe wannabe vampire.
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Nov-02/5:12 AM |
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If 'AIDS in a van' was good, it would be good.
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| Re: Sod this! This poem can't rhyme for toffee... by Yardbird |
25-Nov-02/5:06 AM |
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| Re: The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird |
25-Nov-02/5:05 AM |
Wonderful fun. Is 'ran my local council up' supposed to be 'rang my local...'? Ok, now I'm nitpicking.
Great fun.
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| Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird |
25-Nov-02/5:02 AM |
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| Re: Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird |
25-Nov-02/5:00 AM |
Hee hee hee. You've really outdone yourself this time, Yardbird. Immensely funny, yet a frightening amount of realistic potential
(Don't ask) 10/10
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| Re: My world Of Emptiness by abbaslittleclingon |
25-Nov-02/4:43 AM |
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I quite like this-it would go well to a Black Sabbath tune (can't remember which one though...) I agree that the first line needs adjusting 8/10
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| Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Nov-02/4:32 AM |
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Has anyone read my last comment re Yardbird (on Childe of my Buttocks)? Please consider it to apply here as well. This is the funniest thing on poemranker and is worthy of a top two place-if not number one.
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| Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Nov-02/4:26 AM |
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Hey, I've just had a brilliant idea! Let's all kick Yardbird until he stops spewing crap and appreciates a poem for its content (sorry Rich). Anyway, I don't think it's pretentious, just original. Have you ever considered writing a full length story-perhaps something like Lord of the Haemerrhoid Rings?
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| Re: Blade by Blade |
25-Nov-02/4:05 AM |
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Oh, and by the way-Blade isn't really a wannabe vampire at all, he's just sucker-punched the lot of you, so you can now disregard anyhting he says (like you regarded it anyway...)
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| Re: Blade by Blade |
25-Nov-02/4:03 AM |
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| Re: Flamin Monkey's by Blade |
25-Nov-02/3:50 AM |
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Shep, is this an attempt at an autobiography? Is it?
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| Re: Damn chickens by ciantu |
25-Nov-02/2:36 AM |
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What the fuck are you on? I want some too.
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| Re: Wave to the starving children Miss Denmark. by horus8 |
25-Nov-02/2:30 AM |
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| Re: suicide lost the plot by T'ien |
25-Nov-02/2:21 AM |
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| Re: suicide lost the plot by T'ien |
25-Nov-02/2:20 AM |
If anyone really needs to know, Lark Angel is Lark Angel and no-one else.
It's a bloody good song, but I thought there was another verse to it last time you showed me, LA. Or is it my memory remembering things that didn't happen?
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| Re: Forgotten by T'ien |
25-Nov-02/2:15 AM |
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Wowee, I didn't know you were that depressed. That's a very good poem though.
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