on Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer
5 Jul 2003, 2:02 PM
one of the best 'winge about settle' poems. There should be an award
on Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz
5 Jul 2003, 1:58 PM
'we must learn to love one another AND die'
and
'i will not go down under the ground/cos somebody tells me that deaths comin round'
just a couple of quotes with reference to this transcription
and
'i will not go down under the ground/cos somebody tells me that deaths comin round'
just a couple of quotes with reference to this transcription
on Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8
5 Jul 2003, 1:51 PM
bipolar disorder tends to work in cycles. If someone changes moods so quickly as that I suggest it is the cocaine not the bipolar.
Nice though. Westerners are so precious with their illnesses
Nice though. Westerners are so precious with their illnesses
on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer
5 Jul 2003, 3:34 AM
Insightful and communicative
on SHAME AND THE OLD MANS CANDLE by Garrett S Sexton
5 Jul 2003, 3:24 AM
the tone of the poem seemed so benign as well. I didn't get it until the end
clever
clever
on Untitled #13 by david
4 Jul 2003, 1:36 PM
reads well.
heavily influenced by biblical imagery I think
painful in nature/ubiquitous in effect is a nice play on words
nice simple words to build a picture, not too tied to loaded terms
heavily influenced by biblical imagery I think
painful in nature/ubiquitous in effect is a nice play on words
nice simple words to build a picture, not too tied to loaded terms
on Lycanthropes and L-dopamine by horus8
4 Jul 2003, 8:27 AM
irreverent, funny role reversal
do you mean L-DOPA in the title?
the drug given to people with parkinsons that made them all schizophrenic
do you mean L-DOPA in the title?
the drug given to people with parkinsons that made them all schizophrenic
on Fall Of The Heartlands by Mr Pig
4 Jul 2003, 8:24 AM
fine selection of language, the traditional with the new
the final line is good about the sword through the ventricles of a heartland. Streams as veins. I think the pneumatic part is mixing metaphors though.
this is definitely one of your best
the final line is good about the sword through the ventricles of a heartland. Streams as veins. I think the pneumatic part is mixing metaphors though.
this is definitely one of your best
on Misgivings by Topaz Servias
4 Jul 2003, 8:19 AM
this needs a bit more of you in it, the lack of originality detracts from the feeling you want to get across.
what I do like about this is the rhythm and sonority, even though you don't appear to be explicitly rhyming your words.
what I do like about this is the rhythm and sonority, even though you don't appear to be explicitly rhyming your words.
on Mirror to Mirror by Roisin
3 Jul 2003, 9:45 AM
reads well
the title mirror mirror is a bit overused
good ending structure, perhaps the words a bit cliched
other than that good, I like your use of modern language
the title mirror mirror is a bit overused
good ending structure, perhaps the words a bit cliched
other than that good, I like your use of modern language
on Orbiting Venus by scitz
3 Jul 2003, 6:54 AM
nice poem
not entirely unpornographic though
not entirely unpornographic though
on The Artists Creation by Kitch
3 Jul 2003, 6:53 AM
nothing he feels/ addict to a needle? what about withdrawal
like the hyena analogy
like the hyena analogy
on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II
3 Jul 2003, 6:50 AM
let us for a moment
pretend we were poets
pretend we were poets
on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II
3 Jul 2003, 6:30 AM
I knew horus8 and jeremy b were the same but bachus?
bachus was a shit to me the other day none of the others were
glad you didn't mention me i'm kind of sensitive
yours richard
ps i have these thoughts sometimes too
bachus was a shit to me the other day none of the others were
glad you didn't mention me i'm kind of sensitive
yours richard
ps i have these thoughts sometimes too
replying on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer
2 Jul 2003, 8:03 AM
i meant a bit corny, a bit out of place
replying on STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck
1 Jul 2003, 1:14 PM
i kind of meant stigmata to do with the burning red to black. The kind of violent language, the tight skin
on STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck
1 Jul 2003, 11:08 AM
stigma an interesting word to use.
i think of stigmata which draws a link with the first verse somehow in its explicitness.
i think of stigmata which draws a link with the first verse somehow in its explicitness.
on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer
1 Jul 2003, 11:03 AM
the computer feel is a bit corner.
other than that it sets itself an ambition and answers it, well reasoned.
cooking for food is an interesting link, Plath used to do lots of baking before writing.
other than that it sets itself an ambition and answers it, well reasoned.
cooking for food is an interesting link, Plath used to do lots of baking before writing.