on Fatty Nerd Trilogy by Agemo-Z
6 Dec 2002, 8:08 PM
cruel intentions
are funny
aren't they?
are funny
aren't they?
replying on Fetish. by Plasticgirlwithgun
6 Dec 2002, 7:58 PM
" As plain as broth. As wild as rice.
You try so hard but just end up as nice.
I would and I'd; I'd suicide for you.
You shaved your head. You pierced your nose.
You've done it all and all that's left are holes.
You misery. You broken tree.
I'll be the trunk and take the axe."
(lyrics by Martin Tielli, from the album by Nick Buzz)
You try so hard but just end up as nice.
I would and I'd; I'd suicide for you.
You shaved your head. You pierced your nose.
You've done it all and all that's left are holes.
You misery. You broken tree.
I'll be the trunk and take the axe."
(lyrics by Martin Tielli, from the album by Nick Buzz)
on Fetish. by Plasticgirlwithgun
6 Dec 2002, 7:25 PM
i think this is your best yet.
on Someone who by Sugarbbybuttrfly
6 Dec 2002, 7:14 PM
in the real time world
beauty and ugly
come wrapped up.
two for one.
our special deal.
one life only.
BTW I like the line "makes love and doesn't screw"
beauty and ugly
come wrapped up.
two for one.
our special deal.
one life only.
BTW I like the line "makes love and doesn't screw"
on Allegheny Winter Lament by jdsnyd
3 Dec 2002, 10:31 PM
For some reason, I love the last line.
"the bastards of creation"
some good stuff here.
"the bastards of creation"
some good stuff here.
replying on she said by Bill Z Bub
3 Dec 2002, 10:24 PM
Hmm. Oddly, it was all one stanza originally. I decided to separate the lines at the last minute as an aid to the rhythm. Your suggestion is under consideration.
Thanks, Rebecca.
Thanks, Rebecca.
replying on she said by Bill Z Bub
3 Dec 2002, 10:20 PM
Thanks again, INTRANSIT!
replying on she said by Bill Z Bub
3 Dec 2002, 10:19 PM
Thanks. Interestingly, this poem was untitled until I decided to post it here. And I actually considered "Lessons", but thats the title of another poem I've written.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
1 Dec 2002, 10:01 AM
<grin>
on FHjk by Dark Angle
30 Nov 2002, 10:54 PM
brilliant in its simplicity and directness
or not
but what the hell
or not
but what the hell
on Ponder on Pagan. by <{Baba^Yaga}>
30 Nov 2002, 10:33 PM
For thinking wide and epic and deeply,
I dub thee sir ten
ly.
I dub thee sir ten
ly.
replying on A certain kind of misanthropy. by Plasticgirlwithgun
29 Nov 2002, 9:22 PM
don't mind him, he's mad cuz his gerbil died.
And he can't spell his own name.
And he can't spell his own name.
replying on A certain kind of misanthropy. by Plasticgirlwithgun
29 Nov 2002, 9:20 PM
You're a bitter, bitter old man, aren't you?
It's like looking into a mirror...
but now I try to make friends
and my life is a little happier because of it.
ps my sister likes you
It's like looking into a mirror...
but now I try to make friends
and my life is a little happier because of it.
ps my sister likes you
on A certain kind of misanthropy. by Plasticgirlwithgun
29 Nov 2002, 8:47 PM
you go grrrl!
that happened to me in high school, girl dumped me for my best friend.
that really really sucks. really really REALLY sucks. Hell, that was a decade ago, and I'm still not over it.
that happened to me in high school, girl dumped me for my best friend.
that really really sucks. really really REALLY sucks. Hell, that was a decade ago, and I'm still not over it.
replying on Life of some girl. by Plasticgirlwithgun
29 Nov 2002, 8:57 AM
Well,
Keep writing.
Keep writing.
on Drunken note #2 by blackball
28 Nov 2002, 3:55 PM
Well sir, I like it. I certainly do.
on Sociology of Deviance by blackball
28 Nov 2002, 3:39 PM
Really like the ending.
But I'm not sure what its about.
But I'm not sure what its about.
when used by a songwriting genius like Martin Tielli.
Ciao.