poemranker ::20 most recent comments by razorgrin (401-420)

Comments byrazorgrin, 401–420 back. Include replies

on hallway by blackball 25 Nov 2002, 6:33 AM
I like it.
wench-a-riffic. i wish i had a tarantula.
on All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl 20 Nov 2002, 7:20 AM
unpleasantly bumpy rhythm and pretty incoherent too. ick.
on some deleted poem 25 Nov 2002, 6:35 AM
The last stanza and last line are what make it good.
on some deleted poem 25 Nov 2002, 6:43 AM
A friend of mine sent me winnie the pooh slash once.Try finding sloth porn. a friend of mine was sent to find it a year ago and is convinced it does not exist.
on Bacchus and the Ivy by <{Baba^Yaga}> 25 Nov 2002, 6:49 AM
cool.
on Beginning or End? by xdarkxangelx24 25 Nov 2002, 6:51 AM
it's the end. unless you're a pansy horizontally slitting his wrists for attention.
on The Abyss of myself by ciantu 25 Nov 2002, 6:54 AM
naughty=fun, though.
on some deleted poem 22 Nov 2002, 6:26 AM
Once a friend of mine was on the bus when another passenger got explosive diarrhea all over my friend's shoes. So he tried to go to the mall to buy replacements. They wouldn't let him in to buy shoes because he was barefoot. stupid mall people. quality.
on Damn you, Mary Poppins... by Yardbird 22 Nov 2002, 6:12 AM
nice.
on some deleted poem 22 Nov 2002, 6:13 AM
you know he liked it. the tentacle-beast did too.
on American Poem by ASTRO-GLIDE 22 Nov 2002, 6:17 AM
holy crap. this made my bowels hurt. unpleasantly.
I wanted to see it.
on Emptiness by Jagang 21 Nov 2002, 11:09 AM
but of course they would p&k, as I am beloved and revered by legions!
on some deleted poem 21 Nov 2002, 11:07 AM
yup, that's it in a nutshell.
on Emptiness by Jagang 20 Nov 2002, 1:28 PM
I re-read this to see if it was as bad as I remember. yep. you know, if you killed yourself, no one would miss you.
on some deleted poem 20 Nov 2002, 1:30 PM
not bad. I think more poems should contain butlers.
on some deleted poem 21 Nov 2002, 11:04 AM
zombie-licious.
on some deleted poem 25 Nov 2002, 12:56 PM
I'm digging the jellied skin. and the tom waits.
on some deleted poem 25 Nov 2002, 6:39 AM
rort. abort.