on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 1:18 PM
boo.
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 2:32 PM
now, now, K??dresh, don't tease him for his muddled thoughtmeats. Tease him for his inability to compose a decent poem.
on Mary Mother by DevilTmptrss
6 Aug 2002, 6:15 AM
'tis a thing of wonder. I smile.
on loki's end by yarlgrenn
6 Aug 2002, 8:39 AM
this is beyond mighty.gadzooks.
on Lucky's Day by razorgrin
7 Aug 2002, 3:50 PM
sebaceous?? why "sebaceous"?
on The Prettiest Mother in the World by rosebud
7 Aug 2002, 1:29 PM
I was going to say something unkind, but that's just sweet.
on The Beggar by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
7 Aug 2002, 4:17 PM
the only upside of the homeless is nobody looks for them when they mysteriously go missing.
on Joe likes "DYNAMITE"! by horus8
7 Aug 2002, 4:20 PM
ka-BOOM! i like this one.
on The One I think About by ThoughtfulSoul
7 Aug 2002, 4:27 PM
Some people jerk off, some write poems about the girlie they adore. I'd rather you were in the first category.
on Untitled by Twisted Wizard
8 Aug 2002, 6:01 AM
grr..he is angry.he says "fuck". Feel the righteous angst!
on some deleted poem
8 Aug 2002, 6:02 AM
that is a damn fine piece.
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 3:54 PM
this looks like something scrawled in the margins of a 10th-grade notebook. oooooh, a grimoire! this must mean you are an all-powerful magician!And you wrote three of them! How precious! This poem is a collection of inane word-bites. No substance.
on Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8
7 Aug 2002, 4:05 PM
that was great.you tell good stories.
on NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8
7 Aug 2002, 4:31 PM
this is really good.Damn good.
on Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8
7 Aug 2002, 4:40 PM
the sequel to "a passing love" is in the works. It'll be fun. happy birthday.
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
6 Aug 2002, 12:21 PM
No, Poetie, I don't. However I do think you should leave. Lots of people die from AIDS. Did you know that in the Middle Ages, when thousands were dying from the Plague, people were writing songs about it? poetie, you're just a whiny, oversensitive teenybopper who can't take anything but romantic, cliched tripe as poetry.
sliver, in a little wisconsin town in the 50's a man called Ed Gein killed old women and wore their skins, among other things. Kids are being abducted in all sorts of communities. Wake up and rub the sparkles out of your eyes, the small towns have their dirty secrets too.
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2002, 12:33 PM
you flesh is the only truth. your will is the only one that should affect you. all else is lies.
on Earthquake by ifni
4 Aug 2002, 12:35 PM
that's beautiful. think about the moving electrons in the atoms that make up your body. nothing is still and everything is changing.