on So Cold by mytenderrage
29 Jul 2002, 4:25 PM
you're cold and alone because nobody like you, sweetness.that is because you're a whiny, self-absorbed little fuck.
on The Watching Brother by forestchild7
27 Jul 2002, 4:29 PM
my Great Mother is Kali..who's yours?
on Poem Ranker by abecedarian
30 Jul 2002, 7:51 AM
bloody fantastic!
on Master Chef by Takay Shitar
30 Jul 2002, 7:36 AM
yummy.reminds me of my triumph: expired fake nutella on stale bread.deelish!
on Mobile home agenda by Bachus
30 Jul 2002, 6:00 AM
actually, horus darling, it reminds me of your work quite a bit.in the future, i'd rather you didn't make assumptions about what i'd enjoy, my suntanned amigo. about the poem...um....i like the D&D mention.that's about it.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 6:08 AM
you're a genius.but then you know i think that.
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
30 Jul 2002, 6:22 AM
Blugirl, though you have not as of yet posted any of your doubtlessly brilliant works, thus far you seem as vacant as raven18.you should be together, possibly on a faraway island or space, where no one can hear you mope.
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
30 Jul 2002, 8:47 AM
and to whom in particular do you address this sad little retort?
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
29 Jul 2002, 4:33 PM
i think what DA is saying is that you can't write worth shit, which is true. not only is the poem a collection of hackneyed angst, but it's badly written. as for your "feelings" argument, i'm sure you think that your emotions are valid (awww...you think you matter!)the fact remains that we don't care that someone dumped your whiny ass and you're bitching and moaning about it.
on some deleted poem
27 Jul 2002, 4:48 PM
dead ones float eventually...
on a sillier note:"if he floats..He's a witch!Burn him!"
on a sillier note:"if he floats..He's a witch!Burn him!"
on My Angel by mytenderrage
29 Jul 2002, 4:22 PM
you blithering ass! ANGELS!!!!!Your work is always shit, but this one takes the(devil's food)cake. of all the cliched crap, you write about angels. you should be flayed with a dull knife, dragged over carpet tacks and dipped in rubbing alcohol. thank you, you waste of oxygen.
on The Service by forestchild7
27 Jul 2002, 4:30 PM
why angels? of all the New Agey crap, why angels? fook, i say.
on Night Work by forestchild7
27 Jul 2002, 4:31 PM
I dunno..my night's work tends to involve a crowbar, a shovel and the nearest cemetary....
on some deleted poem
27 Jul 2002, 4:35 PM
It's like talking to a friendly old hippie. reminds me of an english teacher i had in highschool.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 7:28 AM
tentacles answer everything.unless you're an anime schoolgirl.then they cause problems.(8 by the way)
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 6:04 AM
i enjoy. crawling chaos=good. it's a subtle bit of allusion and it makes me gleeful.
on Perfect by mytenderrage
29 Jul 2002, 4:23 PM
stay in your dark corner.forever.
on To You, In Warmer Climes by <~>
30 Jul 2002, 7:35 AM
pretty:)
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2002, 4:29 PM
I like it.it's fun to say aloud.mmmmm...tentacley.cthulhu fhtagn.