on hard as a rock by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 2:34 PM
brilliant, as usual.
on Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Mar 2003, 6:49 AM
nicely done. the third stanza made me dance, as I made the mistake of attending a protest for shits and giggles yesterday. it was the most depressing spectacle I've seen in ages.
on I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:37 PM
hey, you know what they have that you don't? An IQ over room temperature and a functioning set of genitals.
on Return of a Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo
16 Mar 2003, 12:53 PM
yes he is, horus. dee-lite.
on some deleted poem
21 Mar 2003, 6:46 AM
"Two buildingS", assmaggot. What exactly did you do personally? You watched it on CNN. Here's a "god-bless-ameriKKKa-head-pat" just for you. The poem is cheesy, trite and nauseating to the extreme. They didn't go down in an evil way, they went down by gravity, due to a sudden loss of architectural integrity, which isn't evil in and of itself. "Stand together", eh? Standing together when you lynch black people, stand when you intern the japanese, stand together up to your asses in the blood of the natives with your hands on your cheeseburger-clogged hearts praying to your flag. Ideally, I'd get a full chorus line together and write a musical about why people like yourself make me ill. Now get your ass back in the kitchen and make me a fucking sandwich. Stop writing while you're at it.
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 11:47 AM
too true.
on The deafening silence in the world or something by Bachus
17 Mar 2003, 11:22 AM
Depeche mode is fucking awesome.
on some deleted poem
14 Mar 2003, 6:38 AM
giggle. shin's ex (homeless for two years now) busks with a recorder. it's annoying. Nice girl, though.
on Aries, the God of war by Shardik
13 Mar 2003, 1:55 PM
Holy crap, this is bloody awesome. I have a pair of fairly real-looking ram horns I wear from time to time.
on Hippy's Ode to Eternity by bondjedi
13 Mar 2003, 2:05 PM
Fun.
on Strung by bunniesnangels
13 Mar 2003, 2:09 PM
reminds me of the four wives in the movie "raise the red lantern". Very good.
on sexy by elizabethann
13 Mar 2003, 2:14 PM
pheh. Scars=drama-queen cries for attention. I have legs the same measurements as Bettie Page's and an ass that could have its own religion. Can't sympathize, sorry. Maybe massive plastic sugery will alleviate your pain?
on To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:34 PM
Poorly written and dull. You probably smell.
on Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:35 PM
Don't worry sweetie. They're just too good for you, is all. zitface.
on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik
8 Mar 2003, 7:09 PM
whoa...
on some deleted poem
21 Mar 2003, 6:53 AM
my anal poemes are better.
on some deleted poem
12 Mar 2003, 6:32 AM
fun.
on some deleted poem
21 Mar 2003, 6:51 AM
this is certainly "special", but in the short bus-football-helmet-year-round-eating-pa
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2003, 12:49 PM
kthulah, you are my new heroine.
on A Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo
16 Mar 2003, 12:52 PM
mad skillz, good sir. they still crack my shit up on the re-read.