on i dreamt i spoke by roses are read
22 Jul 2002, 10:25 AM
great imagery.
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2002, 10:32 AM
reminded me of a song from Moulin Rouge. I really liked that movie and I enjoy this too.
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2002, 1:29 PM
more spiders.
on One Nation Under God by GAC
22 Jul 2002, 1:43 PM
When I first read this, I thought you were being sarcastic. "This is great",I thought.Imagine my disappointment as I found you were serious about this tripe. The killings, hatred and violence done in the name of this masochistic death-cult must end!Besides, everyone knows god went nuts, did a lot of mescalin and moved to australia in 1965.He doesn't care anymore.goes by the name Jorge von Scheissekopf now, I think.you make me slightly nauseous.toodles.
on Suffocating by mytenderrage
22 Jul 2002, 1:46 PM
Dear god! The angst! It's attacking!!GAAAAHHHH!Run!Save yourselves!
on A Passing Love by razorgrin
20 Jul 2002, 12:17 PM
whoopty-do, you were on smack and in prison. that doesn't make you "deep" or "gritty", that makes you a fuckup. Actually I work for the government, I'm just based in the mall and i'm paid exceedingly well for it. I simply felt like telling a story not about me and I didn't feel like writing endless paragraphs about necrophilic sex.Writing about your immense pain is all well and good but it gets tedious as all fuck after a while, especially for the reader. I personally would rather write about a variety of things.And what the hell is your issue with Canada anyway??We have been voted the best place in the world to live.And the States are..gunfucking rednecks, pedophile murderers, polygamous snakehandlers and Michael Jackson. Seriously, though, you're one to talk about real jobs.Actor, musician, junkie your resume is truly impressive. Try thinking outside your personal experience, it might help your writing.Emphasis on might.
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 12:35 PM
Mother of mercy, that's terrible. Also, learn to spell.
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2002, 1:28 PM
Whatever 60's-relic necromancer raised you from your grave,Mr. Lennon, should be strung up by his toes. And what the hell is up with putting copyrighted stuff here anyway??
on Cut by TheVampireLeStan
19 Jul 2002, 11:56 AM
cutting oneself is overrated.then you're left with a bunch of stupid-looking scars, like a bad tattoo. Better to distact yourself till the need to slash yourself up subsides.
on scarred by TheVampireLeStan
19 Jul 2002, 11:58 AM
I partially disagree with DA on this one.You post them for attention.you cut because you're sad. I understand the feeling though. It will get better.
on the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o
19 Jul 2002, 12:00 PM
Laid not layed.A barren grave would be...an empty hole?
on Eyes, Crying. by LucidRevelation
19 Jul 2002, 12:07 PM
must be difficult to moan silently..
on some deleted poem
19 Jul 2002, 1:22 PM
as a feminist, I must say I'm disappointed.The 60's are over. If a girl can't recognise the bullshit being handed to her for what it is, she deserves it.
on The pretty girls by sunfloweronfire
19 Jul 2002, 1:27 PM
and you, unlike them, won't sleep with a billion assholes and wind up with an embarrassing disease or a kid. Also, you can likely look forward to growing older without monthly boobjobs and so many facelifts that you resemble a sphincter. here's a hint: water thrown to the face makes mascara run, blinding them and leaving you free to pop their inflato-falsies with a pin.
on some deleted poem
19 Jul 2002, 1:30 PM
but your spelling is crap and so is the tripe you put forth as poems. Speech may be free, but when you run out of things to say, you shouldn't keep talking.
on Ocean's Passing by forestchild7
19 Jul 2002, 2:17 PM
we'll talk of shoes and ships and sealing-wax, of cabbages and kings...
on Lucky's Day by razorgrin
19 Jul 2002, 2:54 PM
I'm promoted from what, o seraphim with scatological tasts?
on Lucky's Day by razorgrin
19 Jul 2002, 2:55 PM
thanks, by the way. i thoght of it while I was eating and almost choked to death laughing.
on Lucky's Day by razorgrin
19 Jul 2002, 2:58 PM
truly my heart has been warmed.