on POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy
24 Sep 2003, 5:01 AM
Sounds like someone's bitter. Take comfort in the likelihood that you probably don't have chlamydia, unlike them. Not your worst poeme, though. 6
replying on In the Cold Waste by razorgrin
23 Sep 2003, 5:53 AM
I was going to respond, but you took the words right out of my mouth, sir.
I considered being a nice person and not hassling you about your mom (I have a target for that), thereby skipping this poem. However, I read it. You owe me thirty seconds of a perfectly miserbable life. I'd just like to say I agree with Mr. Dreamer. Also, if you held the knife above your head, the angle would likely cause the blade to bounce off your rib or more likely collarbone and you'd just cut off your tit. Not saying that wouldn't be an idea. By the way, nobody does care. Except sliver, but he doesn't count. Likely just wants in your pimply panties anyway.
on Yoko and Sakura Make Love by William Delacroix
22 Sep 2003, 5:59 PM
Girl on girl action that fails to even harden one nipple. FAIL!
on A Meandering Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo
22 Sep 2003, 5:57 PM
Nice. I like the Berserk one.
on A Bucolic Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo
22 Sep 2003, 5:49 PM
Nice one. Very nice indeed.
on minotaur by Bill Z Bub
22 Sep 2003, 11:41 AM
Hot damn.
on End of year poem by <~>
16 Sep 2003, 9:13 AM
The stanza about September is wonderful.
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8
12 Sep 2003, 7:11 AM
Gross. I smile. Flip flops for all.
replying on Lifestyles of the ripe and glamourless by horus8
12 Sep 2003, 7:02 AM
Between the drug dealer story and the "show me your tits", which was the icing on the cake, you get a twelve. or would if I could vote higher than ten. I hate some other stuff in the world too, though. Namely cold foggy weather and whoever is behind the lateness of my fucking student loan. i applaud you, sir.
on A Fistful of Haiku at School by HaikuMofo
12 Sep 2003, 6:57 AM
Markie was wearing the skirt the other day. The word 'shanty' always makes me break into giggles. Now the computer lab's looking at me funny.
on A Fistful of Haiku in Yellow by HaikuMofo
12 Sep 2003, 6:55 AM
The lobefucker one was delightful. i'm jealous you beat me to the subject.
on A Fistful of Haiku in Yellow by HaikuMofo
12 Sep 2003, 6:54 AM
Aww..cutie flower chick. you must find her. Who's the hottie in your room?
on Lets Do Lunch (At Ground Zero) by scitz
11 Sep 2003, 9:18 AM
The rant rated a 2, but the senryu gets 7.
on null by Bill Z Bub
10 Sep 2003, 6:55 AM
Mighty. Your kung-fu is awesome.
replying on I Usually Wear Pants by razorgrin
10 Sep 2003, 6:53 AM
I use the bastard English of your most tree-infested of ex-colonies. Thanks, though.
replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
10 Sep 2003, 6:42 AM
I dunno, I'd like to give it a ten, but Jesus kinda messed up the dismount so 9/10 for the Christers.
replying on I Usually Wear Pants by razorgrin
10 Sep 2003, 6:39 AM
Bunny, there's a world of difference between a little plumber crack and a little over half of my ass.