on Walk in the Dark by Carvaceous
5 Mar 2003, 7:20 PM
I just realized something....We can't communicate by E-mail...but do your parents know you have "THIS" account? We can leave note to each other this way.....
on Stolen Away by Carvaceous
5 Mar 2003, 7:18 PM
These shards of red
Laying scattered all around
Reflect the beauty
A shimmer in the dark
A glimmer of hope
Some prayer for the future
It's all that can be given
For one who's heart
Now broken in sorrow
Lies surounding my feet
A note of chance
The sound of possibilities
To look ahead
But never forget
This weeping man
The hardest of choices
Made these shards.....
Laying scattered all around
Reflect the beauty
A shimmer in the dark
A glimmer of hope
Some prayer for the future
It's all that can be given
For one who's heart
Now broken in sorrow
Lies surounding my feet
A note of chance
The sound of possibilities
To look ahead
But never forget
This weeping man
The hardest of choices
Made these shards.....
on Thorns of Grace by smlink84
21 Jan 2003, 7:29 PM
okay, i get the gist, but it's just....umm...weird
on Pain in Death by Freethinker1602
12 Jan 2003, 7:43 PM
Very nicely done, shows REAL talent for this.
on Curse fait by Freethinker1602
12 Jan 2003, 7:38 PM
So what if it's juvenile, Hare, it still is good ,and Kitty, he's entitled to his opinion, at least it wasn't zero, anything written in this site should garuntee at least a 1.
on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
12 Jan 2003, 7:15 PM
Bearded-Man says, "inerestingly excellent.
on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
12 Jan 2003, 7:07 PM
Hey Man-with-pants, better than mine, though mine was more confusing.;-) Gardez votre promenade avec Jesus!
on Rose Wall by Carvaceous
12 Jan 2003, 6:59 PM
This is like....ummmm....a hopeless endevour?
on Ode to the inafamous dark angel by Lucifer
12 Jan 2003, 3:16 PM
Well, let's see, none of Dark Angel's comment are constructive in the slightest, and I don't beleive Darky votes all the time, if you leave a comment then you should vote, it's just respectful to the writers.
on Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer
12 Jan 2003, 3:13 PM
oh My god you actually put THAT on here, well, grr... You'll get it just you wait.....
replying on Track.... by Topaz Servias
7 Jan 2003, 5:32 PM
Gosh this line is kinda flat,
My soul is squished beneath a mat;
You can take that sandwich back,
My dirty room is filled with tack.
My soul is squished beneath a mat;
You can take that sandwich back,
My dirty room is filled with tack.
on Slippery Reprieve by Carvaceous
7 Jan 2003, 5:18 PM
WEll done well done......shows you what life is like when it's elusiveness hides itself within your own grasp.
on Condolences by Carvaceous
7 Jan 2003, 5:15 PM
Well....ummm...instead of jumping around this one seems to flow in every direction all at once, going around and nipping itself in the butt. good job though, it sends the feeling of sorrowful forgetfulness.
replying on Track.... by Topaz Servias
1 Jan 2003, 6:01 PM
It's up to you, I made this while on the porceline crapper thingy.
on Doped Up Dr. Seuss by smlink84
1 Jan 2003, 5:48 PM
Look at me, the stupid turd
lookie now, I shot your bird
I know the answer to life
We all know it isn't your wife
Are you going to eat MY fish?
Well ywer gonne Sindit agel qish
Your cat is dead, let's all rejoice
I ate it's head, spit out it's voice.
( :-) Some time later, Man-with-Pants!!)
Signed, Dirty-room
lookie now, I shot your bird
I know the answer to life
We all know it isn't your wife
Are you going to eat MY fish?
Well ywer gonne Sindit agel qish
Your cat is dead, let's all rejoice
I ate it's head, spit out it's voice.
( :-) Some time later, Man-with-Pants!!)
Signed, Dirty-room
on Found Lost by Carvaceous
1 Jan 2003, 5:36 PM
My gosh, this is a memorable one, such pictures it plays into your mind, you relate to every word and hang on to the next.
on Mangled by Carvaceous
29 Dec 2002, 3:35 PM
A very interesting allusion, does it pertain to a memory?
replying on When I wake... by Topaz Servias
29 Dec 2002, 10:22 AM
What do you imply with that statement, Bachus?