poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bobjim (61-80)

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on The dog that loved a chicken by <{Baba^Yaga}> 5 Nov 2003, 2:03 AM
excellent another person in a sorry state of mind.
although he got better at the end, he made up for it with the chicken.

Not really a poem though, maybe i should post "The Authelage" on here. tis a far greater tale.

i give you 10 for the wonderful images conjured during the last paragraph.
on Greybie Blue by abecedarian 9 Nov 2003, 11:03 AM
Read my poems about dogs retard. this poem is almost as rejected as nun jokes.
-0-
and don't try and talk to me
on Those weeks I slit my wrists to the Smiths by Jeremi B. Handrinos 13 Nov 2003, 7:33 AM
Liked the beginning, great stuff. Should have kept the initial happy note all the way through. Have you tried making love to geese as a method of cheering yourself up. ...7...
on Plume Gateau by Bobjim 30 Nov 2003, 3:25 PM
Ok, which one of you 2 buggers has submitted this purile piece of crap in *MY* account?

Oh, wait stupid question.
on Experimental Robot Questionaire by horus8 30 Nov 2003, 3:26 PM
This is a purile piece of shit. So is my work, I know, but mine is intentional.
on voices on the bus by Crakyamuni 30 Nov 2003, 3:34 PM
Are you some sort of nut? Hearing voices means you need help, dumbass.
on some deleted poem 30 Nov 2003, 3:37 PM
I read as far as the title, before I relised you certainly are.
on some deleted poem 30 Nov 2003, 3:38 PM
MY PENIS!!

That's whats in the hands of Jesus.

Oh, yea, it's bollocks.
on Bruce Lee is a Lotus Ninja by Shit-Crumpets 30 Nov 2003, 3:39 PM
Shut the fuck up you preteen tit. I bet you can't even get do the ninja moves on mortal kombat, let alone in your ( and I use this in the broadest possible term) 'life'.
on . by Bobjim 30 Nov 2003, 3:51 PM
It's true you know. Anyone want to scratch my big, hairy balls? Anyone?
on Down on Dogs by Bobjim 1 Dec 2003, 3:16 AM
I'm really down on my knee's this week, just for you Bob.
on From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8 10 Dec 2003, 1:14 PM
Average. Not nearly random or insane enough.
on Under a better bed wetter by Shardik 27 Jan 2004, 4:55 AM
Two words:
Retard poem.
That is all.
on Life by 47Ronin 27 Jan 2004, 5:08 AM
Excellent. Almost as good as my "Existence".
10
on A Beard Most Foul by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 4 Feb 2004, 1:38 AM
I feel that this poem is written from your own personal experience.
Begone thou foul, once bearded reject.
on Cutters Part II The Recut (Limerick Triplet) by Shardik 3 Mar 2004, 7:19 AM
If you're going to do bad poetry, do it properly. Still, a 7 for trying.
on Lunacy by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 3 Mar 2004, 7:23 AM
I like this one. I feel it could almost apply to me.
10
on some deleted poem 19 Mar 2004, 10:24 AM
Being mature is a bad thing. Immaturity is much more fun, so you're wrong.
on post-rock messiah by jsd 31 Mar 2004, 6:27 AM
I was going to read this poem, but I got bored after the 3rd line. Still, I'll give you a 5 for trying.
on Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) by Mr Pig 31 Mar 2004, 6:31 AM
I agree completely with all of the above. My ignorance in this matter is not at all obvious and I have a highly enlightened knowledge of what you're talking about.