on server maintenance by nentwined
14 Sep 2014, 6:02 PM
scratch padded poem
on Lizzie Boredom by Bonehiss
14 Sep 2014, 6:00 PM
i hope you did not send this to her.
replying on it is my turn this season by daniella
5 Sep 2014, 7:33 PM
get the to your place beneath the bridge, scamper down from whence you came.
on "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE
2 Sep 2014, 4:07 PM
sense and sensibility permeates this piece, which indeed seems more like the intro to what is a beautiful ode to love lost
on Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove
2 Sep 2014, 4:03 PM
you lost me at the onset.
on The Young Girl From Khartoum by Edna Sweetlove
2 Sep 2014, 4:01 PM
what an odd duck
replying on where once by daniella
1 Jun 2014, 7:34 PM
thank you. i revisited this and thank you all for your comments
replying on Breaking Breath by daniella
1 Jun 2014, 7:31 PM
thank you :)) i am myself kind of tangled in my head.. ee cummings was my poet father.
on Wind By Any Other Name by Edna Sweetlove
30 Dec 2012, 1:20 PM
uh. ok
replying on it is my turn this season by daniella
29 Dec 2012, 12:54 PM
thank you for your thoughts. seasons are really random if we don't look at the calendar and peer deep into the soul instead.
replying on it is my turn this season by daniella
29 Dec 2012, 12:53 PM
daphne dear. that is lovely. thank you i will go check out your new website!
replying on it is my turn this season by daniella
29 Dec 2012, 12:52 PM
drivel is under rated my sweet degenerate
on Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom
9 Dec 2011, 11:32 AM
barfly poetry
on Grafton Street Late Joys by Engelbert Humpalot
9 Dec 2011, 11:30 AM
like out of mad magazine
on The Editor by Dovina
22 May 2007, 10:34 AM
you need an editor. and someone to let you on to the fact: you don't buy fruit from trees, known or otherwise... and lastly, as a poet you should know all trees... tsk tsk
on The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina
22 May 2007, 10:30 AM
you get us about a quarter of the way there and we are begging for some chocolate milk served by kids on the side of the road.
quaint and so pastoral
quaint and so pastoral
on Altitude by half.italian
20 May 2007, 9:26 PM
i'm sorry, it's just not well written.
on Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus!
20 May 2007, 9:19 PM
There are some misconceptions here, that make the zealous hodge podge verses sting even more.
God did not make our lives to be worthless.
His enemies may have killed Jesus, but according to the New Testament, this was part of God's plan... How else could he have fulfilled the passion?
And lastly, because I want to go to sleep, you actually think we could actually hurt the greatest grandest architect...You think it matters if we believe or not??
Only to our own faith... God exists regardless of us, and He or She or whatever our creator is, does not need our votes.
God did not make our lives to be worthless.
His enemies may have killed Jesus, but according to the New Testament, this was part of God's plan... How else could he have fulfilled the passion?
And lastly, because I want to go to sleep, you actually think we could actually hurt the greatest grandest architect...You think it matters if we believe or not??
Only to our own faith... God exists regardless of us, and He or She or whatever our creator is, does not need our votes.
on broken bottles by richa
20 May 2007, 8:33 PM
it's a barren landscape.
i love: brimming with storm but no rejoicing. it makes no sense, but sings.
i love: brimming with storm but no rejoicing. it makes no sense, but sings.
on 311006 txt to russia by daniella
20 May 2007, 8:22 PM
i would edit it, but then lose all ur comments... so it stays as is. but thanx for the feedback!