poemranker ::20 most recent comments by daniella and replies

Comments bydaniella, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

Okay then
on Making a Man by Christof 8 Oct 2017, 9:06 PM
i feel the memories biting through. this is lovely. and i love how you are alluding to the inner man and the outer snow man at once...
replying on our morning bed by daniella 8 Oct 2017, 9:03 PM
where can i find you now... after so many years?
replying on our morning bed by daniella 8 Oct 2017, 8:57 PM
how is it i never saw these posts!
replying on flying home by daniella 8 Oct 2017, 8:20 PM
better late than never. thank you
replying on yellow verse by daniella 8 Oct 2017, 7:38 PM
you are a troll indeed
on Pandora's Box by Edna Sweetlove 8 Oct 2017, 7:30 PM
puh lease
on Ted & Santa Go Gay by Edna Sweetlove 8 Oct 2017, 7:25 PM
ugh
replying on Sofia by daniella 8 Oct 2017, 7:11 PM
15 years later are you still here?
replying on in a singular way by daniella 8 Oct 2017, 6:53 PM
are you still on poem ranker? is it dead here?
replying on connect the dots by daniella 8 Oct 2017, 5:46 PM
thank you.. and standing on this side of Trump.... and all the events that have arisen.... i should make this epic.
Diseloquence is your invention
replying on Sofia by daniella 28 Oct 2015, 5:19 PM
thank you much.
replying on wish by daniella 28 Oct 2015, 5:16 PM
thanks richa
replying on wish by daniella 28 Oct 2015, 5:15 PM
thank you thank you embersandenvelopes
on A HANGMAN'S MOANING by Dhanesh M Kumar 22 Feb 2015, 7:24 AM
i love your thoughts. they are in the right place and the poem works on some levels. keep engineering the phrases. and perhaps punctuation is needed, for example:
Alas doing, for the sake of bread
no?
on Pakistan school massacre by Dhanesh M Kumar 22 Feb 2015, 7:21 AM
there is a lot of feeling and outrage and sadness that is begging poetic justice in this poem
replying on Some of us by daniella 22 Feb 2015, 7:19 AM
thank you :)
where are all the good people?
on February by half.italian 14 Sep 2014, 6:25 PM
this is just not written well
on Outliers by nypoet22 14 Sep 2014, 6:20 PM
some of the metaphors don't work, not even surreally...
there are some great phrases here, some imagery but then too much prothletysing...
zest of a grapefruit is never sweet, always bitter.
work it.