on The Young Girl From Khartoum by Edna Sweetlove
2 Sep 2014, 4:01 PM
what an odd duck
on Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove
2 Sep 2014, 4:03 PM
you lost me at the onset.
on Lizzie Boredom by Bonehiss
14 Sep 2014, 6:00 PM
i hope you did not send this to her.
on server maintenance by nentwined
14 Sep 2014, 6:02 PM
scratch padded poem
on What Bitches? Oh yeah, I'll be talkin major shit. by SupremeDreamer
15 Jan 2017, 5:30 PM
Diseloquence is your invention
on Ted & Santa Go Gay by Edna Sweetlove
8 Oct 2017, 7:25 PM
ugh
on Pandora's Box by Edna Sweetlove
8 Oct 2017, 7:30 PM
puh lease
on Altitude by half.italian
20 May 2007, 9:26 PM
i'm sorry, it's just not well written.
on The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina
22 May 2007, 10:30 AM
you get us about a quarter of the way there and we are begging for some chocolate milk served by kids on the side of the road.
quaint and so pastoral
quaint and so pastoral
on The Editor by Dovina
22 May 2007, 10:34 AM
you need an editor. and someone to let you on to the fact: you don't buy fruit from trees, known or otherwise... and lastly, as a poet you should know all trees... tsk tsk
on Grafton Street Late Joys by Engelbert Humpalot
9 Dec 2011, 11:30 AM
like out of mad magazine
on Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom
9 Dec 2011, 11:32 AM
barfly poetry
on Wind By Any Other Name by Edna Sweetlove
30 Dec 2012, 1:20 PM
uh. ok
on "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE
2 Sep 2014, 4:07 PM
sense and sensibility permeates this piece, which indeed seems more like the intro to what is a beautiful ode to love lost
on February by half.italian
14 Sep 2014, 6:25 PM
this is just not written well
on Pakistan school massacre by Dhanesh M Kumar
22 Feb 2015, 7:21 AM
there is a lot of feeling and outrage and sadness that is begging poetic justice in this poem
on A HANGMAN'S MOANING by Dhanesh M Kumar
22 Feb 2015, 7:24 AM
i love your thoughts. they are in the right place and the poem works on some levels. keep engineering the phrases. and perhaps punctuation is needed, for example:
Alas doing, for the sake of bread
no?
Alas doing, for the sake of bread
no?
on Making a Man by Christof
8 Oct 2017, 9:06 PM
i feel the memories biting through. this is lovely. and i love how you are alluding to the inner man and the outer snow man at once...
on My Tomahawk goes up, UP, AND AWAY! by Jeremi B. Handrinos
3 May 2025, 8:04 PM
Okay then