replying on Curse fait by Freethinker1602
8 Mar 2003, 7:42 PM
Anything you say. And why did you call me kitty? I mean why? How on earth did it come about?
on I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:33 PM
Hehehe. This seems to be a story that repeats itself in adolescence...Get laid.
well actually here go off on rage it might help
Get bent
Eat Shit
Fuck off
Go rot
well actually here go off on rage it might help
Get bent
Eat Shit
Fuck off
Go rot
on Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:31 PM
Hey. Saying things is what allows us the freedom to acknowledge that we think. I mean. Would you rather have a person you care about shrouded in seemingly harmless dilusions? Or to know that they are enlightened. I'm happier just because some one made me realise that I don't have to hang around ppl to have friends. I'm thankful that I discovered this
on To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:27 PM
I can stand the thought of mine being with another girl... I want him to. We each wasted such a valuable time of our lives. Stop crying. I mean, it won't help. Once you figure out what you want then you can cry. Just keep looking. Stop focusing on one person
on Heartbreaker by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:21 PM
yeah man. I know what you mean by it. Yet think. Love just isn't worth it. Well maybe in your case lust....hey what would a paid whore know? Just kidding. But a paid whore would know. I mean they make their living on not loving.
replying on hehehe by Freethinker1602
7 Mar 2003, 7:42 PM
see time and time again I see the only way to truly resolve something is to take the negative force out of the equation. Being evil people should just vanish. It's really the simplest alternative. Plus I wrote this and then I thought. Wow. I don't need to be around people. Huh. Yay. I've left them. yet they still have me
on Walk in the Dark by Carvaceous
3 Mar 2003, 7:43 PM
Nice. Then you must know what it is to feel that you search and seek to destroy. That you alone are responsible for certain...things.
replying on Walk in the Dark by Carvaceous
3 Mar 2003, 7:42 PM
Thou vile creature bite your tongue till the taste of blood fills your palate. the things you say to others only further proove that you have a most heinous nature towards yourself.
on Stolen Away by Carvaceous
3 Mar 2003, 7:40 PM
Tsk Tsk Tsk. We are too young too love. Too foolish to consider unrequitted feelings. Too young...I'll be your shoulder to cry on in your time of woe.. I only know because I've been through a love so tortorous that I didn't know if I could stand to look in his eyes with out knowing that he'd be ok. That he'd live. Then as I say...Then She Got Over It the title of a new poem. You'll learn and eventually...Hey here's a thought, maybe you were just looking for validation...Try to feel better and get sleep.
on Fetish Section by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 1:56 PM
hahaha I wish I were 18....
on Peacock Fight by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 1:55 PM
well that's anending thaty certainly explains many things....
replying on The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 4:18 PM
Perhaps you misunderstood the comment. I try to catch all of my errors before posting, so I run them through word processor. The poems are submitted from a journal that I keep with me at all times. Most of the stuff you read is from the beginning of September. I just try to catch all errors. My futuristic idea of the earth is total annihalation of the human race. Bush will take care of that one for us though...
replying on The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 3:44 PM
Thank you so very much. I changed it. be happy. Unfortunately the word processor doesn't catch every little error
replying on Fugly by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 3:33 PM
Hehehe sorry, any ways bachus, I don't read your work
replying on Fugly by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 3:33 PM
I haven't the slitest clue what you said. I changed most of the titles to my poems because my mom found them and read them. She did a little sneaking around, this site is a privelege only to those that find the site through legit means...She however did not. Crystie if you read this...Fuck you. YOU had no right, I don't even live with mom any more, not that I ever will. So just fuck off next time you feel like further tarnishing the relationship with mom.
replying on No future by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 3:29 PM
HOw kind. SO if it were based on a hundred point system, such as the one they use in the schools, I'd still have failed...
replying on Escape is an Unaffordable luxury by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 3:27 PM
I shall not be bothered by your flippant remarks. I submit the poems to my word processor first, then I post them. It said that 'therefor' is no actual word. So I decided to leave it. Hey who am I to question the judgment of a computer?
on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Feb 2003, 5:21 PM
Is this possibly about the catholic church? Well actually I saw your name else where and was wondering if you know that this is one of the most waesome pieces ever written? I personally think that you have talent. Find yourself a good 'play' though
replying on And Then She Got Over It by Freethinker1602
24 Feb 2003, 4:56 PM
Tried. I stop thinking about where I am physically headed. I've ended up in some strange places. Ah well so much for that.
on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger
29 Jan 2003, 6:17 PM
Well this does show moderate talent. We all know that you are capable of far more superior works...It provided something else for me to think about. ThX, Ranger.
l8r. I kinda like ya. YOu have a good personality
l8r. I kinda like ya. YOu have a good personality