Re: Oaxaca city fragment by poetandknowit	13-Sep-02/7:58 PM
oh great now my gums are bleeding 8/10/
Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	13-Sep-02/7:57 PM
i demand to know why this tripe isn't on the worst list? it meets all of the requirements and it has a score 0f 2.99 must it also make inanimate objects speak? must it fell another virgin forest? how long must the young woman of this beautiful planet go without revenge? vote for death by queero! vote zero. <brought to you by 'tireless' why travel on rubber? when you can go tireless, and 'rash guard' why go out with a rash? when you can just work for one?
Re: Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	13-Sep-02/1:44 PM
omnia mutantur nos et mutamur in illis.c
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	13-Sep-02/1:40 PM
this is the mt. rushmore of san fransisco bath house sculptors. sculpt on. 10.~
Re: Hard Times by beakism	13-Sep-02/1:32 PM
fucking genius! hillarious and witty. still though, i really don't like you very much as a person, so piss off. 10.!
Re: Gone Away by Christof	13-Sep-02/1:23 PM
best yet? fucking real potent. father is proud and beating his chest 9/10. i think it would realy be more effective if the heart twisted counterclockwise? just a thought.
Re: Tide by <~>	13-Sep-02/1:21 PM
shit happens...por que? que lastima me' bonita.h
Re: Life : Paradox by amateurR	13-Sep-02/1:19 PM
Life: just the perfect amount of time between the hollow space twixt your ears. unvotable.u
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	12-Sep-02/10:58 AM
hi..z..sorry i've been neglecting you...comment deleter? i've never deleted a comment since i've been here. unfortunately. i still don't know how, nor do i think i want to...i miss ya...i've been rehearsing for the sound of music every fucking day...sucks...have no time for writing! fuck....my son is starting pre-school on monday..i'm so proud! after this fucking trainwreck musical i will be back to leave dripping lust juice 'pon your commentable figure s s s s s s s sexy.hurricane.grating.ida.jumping spider.l
Re: a comment on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8	11-Sep-02/1:58 PM
yeah..you're probably right...1/7 is still high when your talking about 200 pieces though...or more..who knows how maany spinning faces you have...anyway..i was just pissed cuz i actually had to do some physical labor today (plus i have way to much dialogue to memorize this week, forgive)...i appologize...i'll look into shortening it and tightening a new edit. thanx.
Re: a comment on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8	11-Sep-02/9:42 AM
lets not get fucking pety, oops, forgot who i was talking to. open your egyptian book of the dead and figure it out. just cuz you can describe a million ways to play with ones ass and shit in under twenty lines, doesn't mean i can describe the riddle of life in the same enbrowning fashion.....look kids d.a gave me a three cuz i'm cryptic?! wow and, even a break down of "how it is, in the land of the meaningless". -=Clinkin=-. go pet your prawnws gay blade, and let me do what i do!, i don't come over to your side and mess with you. king poo.
Re: a comment on terrorism and break dancing by w~* ATHENA *~w	11-Sep-02/2:05 AM
i like gregory mathers. cads. nice poem!
Re: a comment on The punch drunk underwriter by horus8	10-Sep-02/8:42 PM
i will give you the crackerjack decoder to my heart! thanx for your voluptious feedback
Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof	10-Sep-02/7:50 PM
somebody should fire arrow your canoe...your such a fucking romantic jackoff..drinking a beer with you would be like jerking off to my little retarted brother reading me blake and keats while naring my asshole...fucking weak unintelligable euro trash garden variety monotoned shite! what a fucking waste of time...this is the kinda of shit a tenured professor reads to freshman girls to try and victimize them afterschool out of boredome and lack of inspiration...fuck! you are so well read and deep..!!!!! prima facie? not worth the gallows swing..boring! yawn. 5/10!
Re: BEAKBOY, A Tale Of Suffering by beakism	8-Sep-02/10:38 PM
i concure, mighty bright...francis bacon has let the swine go! 8/10!
Re: Pagan ME King by proteusplum	6-Sep-02/6:15 PM
i too wish for a prometheus high tide..bird bath...this is the HORUS 8 WINNER OF THE BURNT UMBER TOTEMIZE THE LAst SON PRIZE in justifiable death wishes. hand salute 9/10! p.s love the spit whiskey line!
Re: proverbs by Montinequego	6-Sep-02/6:07 PM
it would be whatever we wanted it to be, and it would mean only what it was meant to be meant for. the naming of things has always been our first mistakes....cuz it works both ways..forgetably unforgetful. you should edit for a faster reasd. vertical.
Re: At the Olde Absinthe by Limness	6-Sep-02/6:03 PM
did you edit? or do you not want votes?
Re: Narcissus by proteusplum	6-Sep-02/3:55 PM
good point-i completely understand-i just hate coincidenses-and i also can appreciate why you choose to write about external ideas instead of the all encompassing internal id...but that only works when channeling spirits and inorganic beings, because it still has to travel through your internal filters (the externalized)before it gets to us therefore it's tainted by your opinion always no matter what.. unless you are next to me and we are both physically watching the sunset, and one of us is colorblind and neither of us try to describe what we saw with words only presense and postured aura. and even that could be argued.h
Re: Narcissus by proteusplum	6-Sep-02/3:00 PM
i'm not into re-interpretations or re-evaluating storys that are best served hot once around, blake was. my piece was about observing the creative process on a secret ergot level. this is more of a cross examination of a myth that's best left untouched, lest your weak comparisson be compared forever to a moral ladened myth. i say fuck morals. nice poem. hardly.