on Mastermind by wOrnella Mutiw
24 Jul 2003, 1:37 PM
Hi, my name is horus8, you must be, Stupid. It has been a pleasure, but in the end I believe we all know who the true mastermind was, and in the words of Alexander the Great " All that way for this <wipes his sword of blood>...Oh, well, I suppose We're rich now, let's eat."
on I'm gonna fuck you! by King Abdullah I
24 Jul 2003, 1:26 PM
This title will bring them in, to be sadly dissapointed, like I inevitably will be either way.
replying on ~~~ My Lament For Museheart ~~~ by JoyLuck
24 Jul 2003, 12:55 PM
We hid it up your ass, how about bending over and given it back before we unload the gatlin gun on yo punk aise.
on Feasting Ouroboros by <~>
24 Jul 2003, 12:49 PM
It's great, I'm just of the opinion Bangladesh is a shit hole. Both realistically and metaphorically. Perhaps Katmandu?
replying on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
24 Jul 2003, 12:41 PM
That doesn't matter, only that I can pay my little brother a buck to read this like Captain Kirk is what's truly important.
on I am the gayest by walrus8
23 Jul 2003, 12:05 AM
Top twenty poems
poem style avg # authormissing timeFree verse 7.14 49Bill Z. BubBlue Sky Diner, Thursday NightFree verse 7.00 30<~>Gamma Ray MachineFree verse 6.97 40god'swifefixin' - a tale of woeFree verse 6.93 14hipster flareFalling AsleepLyric 6.88 14MiggyExtra Strength TylenolFree verse 6.86 35DurtKLInstructions to a SculptorFree verse 6.86 83ChristofBread & OrangesFree verse 6.84 37god'swifeI am the gayestOde 6.83 9-=Dark__Angel=-The BloodingFree verse 6.79 71Mr PigThe Wooden Armchair Of Similar DreamsFree verse 6.78 14CaducusThe Order Of ThingsFree verse 6.77 30Mr Pigi will not come to bangladeshFree verse 6.75 23lost in americaSome ThingsFree verse 6.75 10ChristofFamily PortraitFree verse 6.75 18Mr PigGoodbyeFree verse 6.75 18Sunshine ConkeyWatching My Childhood VanishFree verse 6.74 13CaducusDamaged By 'Weakness'Other 6.74 22Mr PigThe Last Words She SaidFree verse 6.73 56CaducusThe GentlemanFree verse 6.68 57-=Dark_Angel=-
And then some.
poem style avg # authormissing timeFree verse 7.14 49Bill Z. BubBlue Sky Diner, Thursday NightFree verse 7.00 30<~>Gamma Ray MachineFree verse 6.97 40god'swifefixin' - a tale of woeFree verse 6.93 14hipster flareFalling AsleepLyric 6.88 14MiggyExtra Strength TylenolFree verse 6.86 35DurtKLInstructions to a SculptorFree verse 6.86 83ChristofBread & OrangesFree verse 6.84 37god'swifeI am the gayestOde 6.83 9-=Dark__Angel=-The BloodingFree verse 6.79 71Mr PigThe Wooden Armchair Of Similar DreamsFree verse 6.78 14CaducusThe Order Of ThingsFree verse 6.77 30Mr Pigi will not come to bangladeshFree verse 6.75 23lost in americaSome ThingsFree verse 6.75 10ChristofFamily PortraitFree verse 6.75 18Mr PigGoodbyeFree verse 6.75 18Sunshine ConkeyWatching My Childhood VanishFree verse 6.74 13CaducusDamaged By 'Weakness'Other 6.74 22Mr PigThe Last Words She SaidFree verse 6.73 56CaducusThe GentlemanFree verse 6.68 57-=Dark_Angel=-
And then some.
on The Call Of Cannons by SupremeDreamer
23 Jul 2003, 12:02 AM
"The pedals of love" Best line ever! What a bike! Dark Bagel once said to me "You must be one of those uncompromising street poetes" You can have that title now. lol. I'm done with it. When i was in prison there was the guard that would wake us up in the middle of the night like it was an emergency... Then he would laugh and start flexing like a boddy building WWF steroid monkey. We called him the python man. What a waste of mashed potatos that bastard was. I never got any sleep.
replying on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
22 Jul 2003, 11:53 PM
lolttm! Indeed.
replying on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
22 Jul 2003, 11:51 PM
Sometimes, in life, you got to miss the boat, and walk. Worthy, or not. See, what's funny is my 'worthy' poems were zero'd to death, because, if you write a great poem on this sight people will avoid it or kill it anyway. Right, a shit poem about being gay, and tada, number 1. My best work was not apparently worthy either, so you tell me? What's worthy on poemranker Mr. Life raft? i've written a poem about everything except what is and what isn't worthy. ThaT'S IT! I'll write a poem about James Worthy.
replying on Border towns & the runs by horus8
22 Jul 2003, 9:44 PM
Yeah, me too, they need to be extinguished.
on the preacher and the poet by http://findingwater
22 Jul 2003, 9:29 PM
The poet? Never, full of caviar maybe and themselves.
on first letter level by http://findingwater
22 Jul 2003, 9:26 PM
A superior piece.
on Your Heart is my Heaven by Free2Rhyme15
22 Jul 2003, 9:06 PM
"diffcult" typo, and there are some gramatical errors. "she pasted away" this made me grin naturally. I'd fix that if I were you, but the sentiment felt honest and pure enough. 6.
on Halves by impert&ent
22 Jul 2003, 9:02 PM
Decent, and powerful.
on A Delicate Poem by EAger to Offend
22 Jul 2003, 9:00 PM
Bountiful yet lean.
on Spider by DreamerSupreme
22 Jul 2003, 8:36 PM
"Crossed arms, standing over the hallway
The angel cries, all it has tried
to make me see..To save me,
Failed".
Yes, very good. Find your subjects and explore them intigrating yourself, so it becomes organic and not self absorbed. I would suggest strengthening your vocabulary and grammar next, but you got the right idea. writing every day on poemranker will teach you that. 7.
The angel cries, all it has tried
to make me see..To save me,
Failed".
Yes, very good. Find your subjects and explore them intigrating yourself, so it becomes organic and not self absorbed. I would suggest strengthening your vocabulary and grammar next, but you got the right idea. writing every day on poemranker will teach you that. 7.
replying on Yellow Star by Mr Pig
22 Jul 2003, 8:24 PM
All very informative, true and lovely points.