on Daddy by mishy_lee
26 Aug 2002, 12:17 PM
your pain comes across, give it time and remember that he love'd you. Make him proud of who your are and who you will be.
on Dare to Dream by Sterling5583
12 Aug 2002, 9:52 PM
Huuummm different but I think you got your point across, you may need to give it to the person you were writing about.
on A Night's Walk By The Brook by ZCatcher
12 Aug 2002, 9:43 PM
Don't know why but I like it.
on Blinded by Your Kiss by ThoughtfulSoul
12 Aug 2002, 9:41 PM
All I can say is "RUN"
on The lonely house by aurora
29 Jul 2002, 12:09 AM
Don't people make happy poems any more?
on ever always: by Sapphire
29 Jul 2002, 12:01 AM
You said it all in just a few words.
on Love at 4 A.M. by x311
22 Jul 2002, 1:27 AM
Ah this is cute. Shows the sentive side,
on No Shoes 4 me, thanx by bronzeNICKELchik
22 Jul 2002, 1:25 AM
Took some thinking to put this together, It's very different but I like it
This is not worth a comment & you are not even brave enough to put out any information about yourself. Just like those cowards who murder people then hide away. You will be punished, if not in this lifetime in the next. Because even your God is sick of your actions.
on My seed of life by bdub420
13 Jul 2002, 11:10 PM
You captured love. What else is there to say.
on Waiting by itchiwitch
13 Jul 2002, 11:05 PM
I really like this! I would like to post it on my website, of course with you name as the composer. Let me know if its ok. You can e-mail me at fire2iceus@yahoo.com Thanks
on Pleasurable Agony by crims0ngh0st
13 Jul 2002, 10:58 PM
Sounds like a real good time
on my cat by itchiwitch
13 Jul 2002, 10:24 PM
Good start where's the rest?
on FAILED PRAYER by MEMORIES
13 Jul 2002, 9:58 PM
This is a real tear jerker but wrote very well. Depressing but good.
on Reflections in a bathroom stall by gandolff25
13 Jul 2002, 9:49 PM
Think I've heard it before or something like it but its still funny :)
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros
9 Jul 2002, 8:37 PM
You need to get out more.
on Have you ever heard of William Carlost Williams 24 by notule
9 Jul 2002, 8:34 PM
Bad really bad. She may want to give you away too.
on Thornwood (Splinters) by OneFingerAnswer
9 Jul 2002, 8:30 PM
Very good you said it all for those who have been there and for those that should be.