on some deleted poem
20 Oct 2003, 8:28 AM
somewhat sappy. perhaps more of a pimple pome?
on Answered Prayers by Pooh_N_His_Honey
1 Oct 2003, 9:55 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Was/Were You? by Alyssa91
1 Oct 2003, 9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
This is a dumb poem. Sorry.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
This is a dumb poem. Sorry.
on this tuesday morning by teacup
1 Oct 2003, 9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey
1 Oct 2003, 9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Noone really knows by CHRMEcountryGRL
1 Oct 2003, 10:02 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on some deleted poem
1 Oct 2003, 11:33 AM
don't quite get the picture. a vase? maybe if you want it to be a pin you should have all the words be vertical like:
P
R
I
C
K
!
P
R
I
C
K
!
on some deleted poem
1 Oct 2003, 11:33 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me by EggbertShootsFire
1 Oct 2003, 9:54 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties by Luzr
1 Oct 2003, 9:55 AM
a boat? I like it.
on Every single days's the same (Acrostic) by [mojo]
1 Oct 2003, 9:57 AM
is acrostic concrete?
on some deleted poem
1 Oct 2003, 10:03 AM
pointy. are you suggesting that the only way home is by going down? is home hell?
on Jingoism saved the wingnut by horus8
1 Oct 2003, 11:31 AM
cowboys are nifty.
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend
24 Oct 2003, 9:19 AM
nicely done
on John Denver's hang-glider by horus8
30 Oct 2003, 6:11 AM
An excellent Poem (But I do believe it is "Hang" Glider)
It reminded me of a thing I read in a book somewhere--where a man was about to drown and was rescued at the last moment. He was upset because he finally was about to find out what it feels like to be a drowning man, and he was now robbed of that experience.
It reminded me of a thing I read in a book somewhere--where a man was about to drown and was rescued at the last moment. He was upset because he finally was about to find out what it feels like to be a drowning man, and he was now robbed of that experience.
on I have no problem with short people of color or religion by horus8
30 Oct 2003, 6:48 AM
an excellent social commentary.
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2003, 10:11 AM
me too.
on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria
10 Mar 2004, 11:30 AM
This is a place to share poetry and get feedback, not a place to voice your teenage problems that seem so big to you now. Get a counselor or something.