Re: Chew your food! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	29-Sep-03/10:55 AM
smells like city, I bet.
Re: If i go out I'll catch it and see the uglys. by baphomet	30-Sep-03/6:54 AM
their should be they're. good use of rhythm.
Re: my cat by itchiwitch	29-Sep-03/10:57 AM
EXCELLENT!
Re: Santa Ana, California by bondjedi	29-Sep-03/10:52 AM
Jesus is dead. move on.
Re: The Haiku by beakism	29-Sep-03/10:50 AM
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Re: The Big Push by Tascobar	29-Sep-03/10:53 AM
ahh yeas, a pooping poem.This one's a real stinker.
Re: Give me beer! by Agemo-Z	29-Sep-03/10:54 AM
certainly not MY mom. She's already drunk today.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Sep-03/10:46 AM
Most mouth breathers don't say much. They're too busy uncrossing their eyes or (the smarter ones)are thinking about chicken feet. but when they speak, YEEEHAAA! is it stupid!
Re: haiku cycle 2 by mudskipper	29-Sep-03/10:48 AM
too much blowing...
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	29-Sep-03/10:56 AM
girls do that, so I've heard. never met any like that though.
Re: Just One More Time by KatieKaBoom	29-Sep-03/10:59 AM
Is this a sex poem? about getting a rash? poison ivy?
Re: ~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~	1-Oct-03/9:47 AM
I guess you should kill yourself. Just kidding.
Re: the door by wuying	1-Oct-03/9:48 AM
Oh yeah, that's concerete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Re: With All My Heart by Tigger8023	1-Oct-03/9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concerete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Re: I'll Always Remember by NobodyGirl9	1-Oct-03/9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Re: You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl	1-Oct-03/9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Re: Dear Dad by liquidlama	1-Oct-03/9:51 AM
Has potential. work on the form.
Re: Tate Street 1956 by wunboi	1-Oct-03/9:51 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Re: Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism	1-Oct-03/9:52 AM
too bad about hating penises. they can be quite fun.
Re: suicide weather and dreary imaginings do no good by xanthippe	1-Oct-03/9:53 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.