on Chew your food! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
29 Sep 2003, 10:55 AM
smells like city, I bet.
on If i go out I'll catch it and see the uglys. by baphomet
30 Sep 2003, 6:54 AM
their should be they're. good use of rhythm.
on my cat by itchiwitch
29 Sep 2003, 10:57 AM
EXCELLENT!
on Santa Ana, California by bondjedi
29 Sep 2003, 10:52 AM
Jesus is dead. move on.
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on The Big Push by Tascobar
29 Sep 2003, 10:53 AM
ahh yeas, a pooping poem.This one's a real stinker.
on Give me beer! by Agemo-Z
29 Sep 2003, 10:54 AM
certainly not MY mom. She's already drunk today.
on some deleted poem
29 Sep 2003, 10:46 AM
Most mouth breathers don't say much. They're too busy uncrossing their eyes or (the smarter ones)are thinking about chicken feet.
but when they speak, YEEEHAAA! is it stupid!
but when they speak, YEEEHAAA! is it stupid!
on haiku cycle 2 by mudskipper
29 Sep 2003, 10:48 AM
too much blowing...
on saving myself for marriage by Venus
29 Sep 2003, 10:56 AM
girls do that, so I've heard. never met any like that though.
on Just One More Time by KatieKaBoom
29 Sep 2003, 10:59 AM
Is this a sex poem? about getting a rash? poison ivy?
on ~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~
1 Oct 2003, 9:47 AM
I guess you should kill yourself.
Just kidding.
Just kidding.
on With All My Heart by Tigger8023
1 Oct 2003, 9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concerete. looks like a jagged edged something.
on I'll Always Remember by NobodyGirl9
1 Oct 2003, 9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl
1 Oct 2003, 9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
on Dear Dad by liquidlama
1 Oct 2003, 9:51 AM
Has potential. work on the form.
on Tate Street 1956 by wunboi
1 Oct 2003, 9:51 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
on Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism
1 Oct 2003, 9:52 AM
too bad about hating penises. they can be quite fun.
on suicide weather and dreary imaginings do no good by xanthippe
1 Oct 2003, 9:53 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.