on Never Better by casey
9 May 2003, 6:53 AM
very good, nice rythem
replying on lost (short) by sir_heff
9 May 2003, 6:18 AM
roughly 28
replying on lost (short) by sir_heff
8 May 2003, 8:34 AM
i thouhgt of this as a lyric to a techno song, so it would repeat many times.......
replying on Poems of Love by BleedingRose
29 Apr 2003, 9:33 AM
you sound like more of an idiot everytime i see you post
on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
24 Apr 2003, 7:12 AM
not as good as your other ones, at least in my opinion.
still not bad, and mostly better than mine.... bastard
still not bad, and mostly better than mine.... bastard
on Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Apr 2003, 8:53 AM
many improtant lessons in this..... very good
10
10
on "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Apr 2003, 8:48 AM
very moving, i really like the last part about quoting your self befor you get to say anything :)
when sobrioty blows...
smoke a bowl.
when reailty nocks....
turn your locks.
when sobrioty blows...
smoke a bowl.
when reailty nocks....
turn your locks.
replying on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose
23 Apr 2003, 8:40 AM
ummm....... i dont really rember what i put....
anyway, its damn good, i have had that idea on the tip of my brain for a wile now, just havent found the words.....
anyway, its damn good, i have had that idea on the tip of my brain for a wile now, just havent found the words.....
replying on glazed point of view by sir_heff
23 Apr 2003, 8:22 AM
just playin' i always pass it ;}
on ForMyFriend, Joneel by Luv2write
22 Apr 2003, 9:40 AM
not your best work. good though
on Understand by Luv2write
22 Apr 2003, 9:23 AM
i think you should revise the last 3 lines
on What do you see by Luv2write
22 Apr 2003, 9:21 AM
i feel like that all the time.
and your probly "worthy" of more than you think
and your probly "worthy" of more than you think
on Poems of Love by BleedingRose
22 Apr 2003, 8:42 AM
i love line 17 thats good shit!
on Changes by CHRMEcountryGRL
22 Apr 2003, 8:38 AM
Right on!
on Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof
23 Jan 2003, 10:17 AM
i wish i could wright like that 10.....
replying on beat myself with a stick by sir_heff
17 Jan 2003, 8:30 PM
thats what i wrote it for :)
on Formerly known as life by KYLE
17 Jan 2003, 7:20 AM
not bad