on The Chastisement of Cupid by Thyme
20 Jan 2003, 2:13 PM
Yes, harder! old man, you understand not the mind of the dominant submissive..get to the end of the line. Next!
on she was a garden of roses by crin
18 Jan 2003, 11:49 AM
"steel resolve" 'thorny resolve' might work better...some how the 'steel' image does not fit, and what would a rose poem be without thorns...que no?
on Who Flamed Roger Rabbit? by poemwanker
18 Jan 2003, 11:32 AM
"yer?" should be 'er' or yers forcing you to then go with butchers, which actually would make this better...i enjoyed it mostly. a funny ditty and witty but not like a three holed titty splittied six ways.
replying on Mommy, why does -=DarkAngel=- use 'an' so much? by <{Baba^Yaga}>
15 Jan 2003, 3:43 PM
You'll get a kick out of this.
http://knowingpoe.thinkport.org/default_
they should call it 'knowing toe" the life and times
of poe jam. lol.
http://knowingpoe.thinkport.org/default_
they should call it 'knowing toe" the life and times
of poe jam. lol.
replying on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
15 Jan 2003, 3:31 PM
That blows! my favorite is fresh water eel. spinach with peanuts, and torro from yellowfin. All of course with hot saki, wasibi, and plenty of ginger with clam miso soup, white or red. Plus a tall beer to wash it all down with.red snapper and spanish mackeral worksd too, fuckit the halibut was no slouch either...ah hell. It's all good. MIFUNE RULES!
on On Wanting to Know The Truth by dougsoderstrom
15 Jan 2003, 1:14 PM
What kind of haiku is this?
replying on The blue light special. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
15 Jan 2003, 1:12 PM
No, Accura auditions defy reality.
I was merely working the extra kale
I have laying around with old manelli
records and david gest interviews.
I was merely working the extra kale
I have laying around with old manelli
records and david gest interviews.
replying on The blue light special. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
15 Jan 2003, 1:08 PM
The guidelines? You are are entitled to your opinion, and it is noted, but I am to busy currently to argue your belief in limitations created by guidelines, and if you assume that I do not know, or cannot, write a guidelined limerick than so be it.
replying on Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man
15 Jan 2003, 10:37 AM
he went jim, Jim, jim. which is a revolutionary stroke of authenticity, you fucking pud puffer.
replying on Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man
15 Jan 2003, 10:35 AM
No, actually we were in the middle of a fierce battle..then you strolled in going "gee guys i hope it's in good fun"? well guess what? it isn't. We actually do hate eachother, and the bullits are real, so take your walker and flask and leak (i meant leaf, but than thought hey, the first works too) identification guide over to that stump and stream yonder, could you grizzly Adam's? thanks...All right boys, let the canon fodder fod.
on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin
15 Jan 2003, 10:20 AM
i was hoping the second one would payoff, but the third was the proof in the pudding. Zombie pudding.
on Thorns of Grace by smlink84
14 Jan 2003, 11:40 AM
die! jesus freak and a good shabbas to you!
replying on Little Tounge by Figure 8
14 Jan 2003, 10:35 AM
lol. The concept's strong though.t
on Good to the Last Drop by Bonehiss
14 Jan 2003, 10:33 AM
minatory. i like it. great title too.
replying on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
14 Jan 2003, 10:15 AM
Also, go fuck yourself. it should say poemwankeries fucking face.
stupid cunt, Do you actually think I do not know how to show posession when it comes to nouns? Here, go suck Jimmy Hoffa's cock Poemwanker (notice how i properly capitalized your user name idiot))
stupid cunt, Do you actually think I do not know how to show posession when it comes to nouns? Here, go suck Jimmy Hoffa's cock Poemwanker (notice how i properly capitalized your user name idiot))
on Where is My BabyGirl? by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
13 Jan 2003, 6:23 PM
made into vellum. your rasp is a rasp-berry.