on Dictionary Magic Test Results (DMTR) by DreamerSupreme
9 Jul 2003, 1:48 AM
That's fun. If you don't mind I'd like to see you play with this and see what comes for my name.
replying on My BPD vs Yours by OneFingerAnswer
9 Jul 2003, 1:44 AM
No I'm not talking about dog shit that cares. The one belongs after the some though. Thanks for the catch.
If you have AIM go press Ctrl + 6 in a message window and you'll get a present from me to you.
If you have AIM go press Ctrl + 6 in a message window and you'll get a present from me to you.
replying on Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8
8 Jul 2003, 11:44 PM
Dear Museheart,
Look fucker. I wasn't pushing you at all. I was just saying that there's a less major form of bi-polar disorder that does have mood swings as rapid as what the poem describes. Manic-depressive disorder doesn't even exist any more. The title is bi-polar disorder.
Do I care about someone I push over the brink? Of fucking course I do. Look at my poems and you'll see how much I care about hurting others.
Do I care about someone I wasn't talking to and have never even heard of takes offence to me giving out information about a mental disorder? Of fucking course I don't. If I had nothing to do with it then I'm not going to waste time feeling guilty about it.
Get the fuck off me with your MDD shit. I myself have B-PD and I'm not up to listening to you bitch when I wasn't even talking to or about you. I was replying to a response to a poem. Neither of which mention you. Take your baggage else where cause I'm not having it.
Sincerly, fuck you,
OneFingerAnswer
Look fucker. I wasn't pushing you at all. I was just saying that there's a less major form of bi-polar disorder that does have mood swings as rapid as what the poem describes. Manic-depressive disorder doesn't even exist any more. The title is bi-polar disorder.
Do I care about someone I push over the brink? Of fucking course I do. Look at my poems and you'll see how much I care about hurting others.
Do I care about someone I wasn't talking to and have never even heard of takes offence to me giving out information about a mental disorder? Of fucking course I don't. If I had nothing to do with it then I'm not going to waste time feeling guilty about it.
Get the fuck off me with your MDD shit. I myself have B-PD and I'm not up to listening to you bitch when I wasn't even talking to or about you. I was replying to a response to a poem. Neither of which mention you. Take your baggage else where cause I'm not having it.
Sincerly, fuck you,
OneFingerAnswer
replying on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer
6 Jul 2003, 5:53 PM
No :( And I'm starting to hate this shit.
Why is that whenever I look at a poem and go back and change something it fucks everything to hell?
*Edits (again)*
Why is that whenever I look at a poem and go back and change something it fucks everything to hell?
*Edits (again)*
on The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme
6 Jul 2003, 2:54 PM
"What good is a pen, if one knows not how to write?"
I've used pens for a lot of things other than writing.
Whistles to weapons the possiblities never end.
I've used pens for a lot of things other than writing.
Whistles to weapons the possiblities never end.
replying on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus
6 Jul 2003, 2:48 PM
No. Just timely. :)
on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Jul 2003, 2:48 PM
I like this the best out of the series. Keep going by all means.
replying on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus
6 Jul 2003, 2:44 PM
He shot the squirrel not the dog.
replying on Rude Awakenings by OneFingerAnswer
5 Jul 2003, 11:52 PM
With your name figures you'd like it. Thanks.
replying on Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8
5 Jul 2003, 4:16 PM
Could be cyclothymic disorder. Shorter, less severe episodes like those of bi-polar disorder.
replying on Herne by OneFingerAnswer
29 Jun 2003, 2:00 PM
I don't know what happened... I had a word after bottom.... I'll have to fix that
And a bay is a kind of horse. Auburn with a black mane I think.
And a bay is a kind of horse. Auburn with a black mane I think.
replying on The Shoulder War by Kitch
28 Jun 2003, 2:34 PM
I agree.
I also think the rhythm in the jelly line is a little off. If you keep it try "and I turn.." It might fix it.
I also think the rhythm in the jelly line is a little off. If you keep it try "and I turn.." It might fix it.
on Creating A Bitch by Kitch
28 Jun 2003, 2:30 PM
Nothing you want me to hear I can say.
I don't get that line. Maybe something like:
What you want to hear isn't what I have to say
The last half of the 3rd stanza seems a little muddled too.
I don't get that line. Maybe something like:
What you want to hear isn't what I have to say
The last half of the 3rd stanza seems a little muddled too.
on The Errant Knight by Thyme
27 Jun 2003, 1:11 AM
YAY! an 8.
on On Someone's Dick by JoyLuck
26 Jun 2003, 11:30 PM
I think the l;ast line could use a hor at the end. You messed up the curve of his balls.
replying on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer
26 Jun 2003, 9:22 PM
I don't perform my poetry. It's not anonymous enough. I prefer to hide behind firewalls.
Actually I wasn't happy with that line either but it was pissing me off so I left it. After reading it with your version in.... Thanks.
One little word, huh?
Well that's the beauty and the
butt of poetry
Look a haiku.
Actually I wasn't happy with that line either but it was pissing me off so I left it. After reading it with your version in.... Thanks.
One little word, huh?
Well that's the beauty and the
butt of poetry
Look a haiku.
on -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw
26 Jun 2003, 6:08 PM
I never found him to be funny. Chalk it up to creative differences
replying on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer
26 Jun 2003, 6:07 PM
Don't be what?
replying on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer
26 Jun 2003, 5:24 PM
I thought about it and I think I like the v more. Ode? Really? Ok. I'm not too good with the styles any way.
replying on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer
26 Jun 2003, 8:49 AM
Whenevber isn't a typo. It's a created month. A combination of the ending of the last few months of the year and whenever. I don't know when I'll finally get the courage up to go. Til is a word. I feel that people say it instead of until often enough that I need not bother with the apostrophe.
The other typo, thanks.
I'll consider punctuation in a bit
I don't mind the proofread. I actually like to have it addressed early. I still think you're putting too much focus on him though. Although he was a great guy and I still love him I've come to terms with his death. It might seem cold but I have. This is about the taking care of myself part of it. I do generally but this is one area that has been hard for me to deal with.
The other typo, thanks.
I'll consider punctuation in a bit
I don't mind the proofread. I actually like to have it addressed early. I still think you're putting too much focus on him though. Although he was a great guy and I still love him I've come to terms with his death. It might seem cold but I have. This is about the taking care of myself part of it. I do generally but this is one area that has been hard for me to deal with.