on Wither Away by darkhelmet10
22 Mar 2003, 9:10 PM
I really enjoy your writing darkhelmet10. This reminds me of 'Shall I compare thee to a summer's day' By William Shakespeare. -8-
on The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus
24 Mar 2003, 12:43 AM
Too much acid. Your only suppose to eat one sugar cube at a time!!
on Attention! - To the Wondering Soul by darkhelmet10
22 Mar 2003, 9:05 PM
So many mixed messages. Think for yourselfs/done with military command. No good/no evil. Sin/Maybe no sin. loved it. -8-
on some deleted poem
22 Mar 2003, 1:30 PM
Confusing. ow! my head hurts. Anything that can do that without being increditably stupid earns a 20. But since the scale only goes to 10 heres a 10.
on Ugly by openwounds
23 Mar 2003, 11:58 PM
Wow! Quick style change. I was looking forward to more gore. Or angst. -7-
on Cursed by GekoHawaii
22 Mar 2003, 8:52 PM
All things have a price and sometimes we just can't afford what we truely want. This gets the I BEEN THERE LIFE GET BETTER AWARD. -10-
on A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus
25 Mar 2003, 2:44 PM
Profound and thought provoking. Excellent -10-
on One More Mile by marvelis
25 Mar 2003, 7:20 PM
Marvelis you my be but I still doubt your Divinty -7-
on So Happy by openwounds
24 Mar 2003, 2:41 PM
Yes. Yes. No (bullets may be fast but knowing my luck I'd miss or something). Been there done that Think I still have a few scars from that, no wait those are the cigarette burns. Maybe It all depends on how good it feels. Nah! They give me my identity.
Now being serious I noticed 'new lesions'. Other than that I it doesn't look like you have any typos that I can see. This lacks you usual hint of detail that makes things what you write have some sense of depth, But I love how you pulled off the 'will you whimper and beg for release' line. -7-
Now being serious I noticed 'new lesions'. Other than that I it doesn't look like you have any typos that I can see. This lacks you usual hint of detail that makes things what you write have some sense of depth, But I love how you pulled off the 'will you whimper and beg for release' line. -7-
on Eternal Waiting by darkhelmet10
22 Mar 2003, 9:07 PM
You win a BEEN THERE BEFORE LIFE GETS BETTER AWARD. No really trust me. Compare this to a poem I wrote called Idiot Box. -10-
on Shut Up by openwounds
23 Mar 2003, 11:32 PM
You know a bar of soap is the prefered method of cleasing ones self but I love the gore that comes to mind. 'they just laughed' would have to be the most creepy line. The 'Now I'm pretty' Fits so perfectly and will probably make alot of people quesy.
BOORAH GRANDMA AWARD. -10-
BOORAH GRANDMA AWARD. -10-
on Fleeting Fantasy by Sawa
24 Mar 2003, 12:17 AM
Hmmm... Amazing. I have given every below a 5 and above it but I have never read a peom that left me felling neutral towards it. So congrats you get my first -5-.
on Relentless by GekoHawaii
22 Mar 2003, 9:00 PM
The way that your words talk about being pulled to different sides and then your eyes feel like they are being pulled to the other side of the page,*gasp for breathe* is absoluty genius. I'm creating a new award just for you. You get the BOORAH GRANDMA AWARD and the SWEET NEVER BEFORE AWARD. -10- and -10- But seeing as to how I only have one vote... You only get -10-
Nice poem, Lunar. As Ranger said the motives of this war are suspect. I don't think its all about the oil, or even closely related to saving Iraqis, much less ending terrorism. Bush is probably using that so that he can keep people looking away from the whitehouse. Mr. Bush's excellent spin control has made him look nice and clean but he pushed for this war and then tryed to pull it off as if he had no other choice. -9-
on charterhouse of dante by daniella
21 Mar 2003, 9:49 PM
Ftw is --111? -6-
on some deleted poem
21 Mar 2003, 10:07 PM
Awe! A bit cliche but a nice blend of typical ideas, obessive compusive behavior, and teen angst. -10-
on The Currency of Blood by Blindproject217
22 Mar 2003, 8:48 PM
Nice use of the heroic couplet.
on Easy Way Out by Blindproject217
24 Mar 2003, 12:08 AM
Ouch. Wow, Sorry blind I usually try to find the best in the works of others but this poem has no real heart, no ryhme, and just a slight dash of image. -0-
on some deleted poem
24 Mar 2003, 12:12 AM
Ewww. Nothing against you but I thought it sucked.
on some deleted poem
24 Mar 2003, 2:28 PM
Well written.