on some deleted poem
4 Feb 2003, 3:35 PM
Simply Divine
on The Stand... an off rip by horus8
7 Feb 2003, 8:41 PM
Ahhhh!!! Test tube monkeys eating brain!!! The Pain, The Horror, Oh The Pain!!!
on Slow motion by INTRANSIT
2 Feb 2003, 4:23 AM
* Opening
on Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels
15 Feb 2003, 5:23 PM
I love that last line.
on some deleted poem
15 Feb 2003, 5:57 PM
P&K there is absolutly nothing wrong with being either young or British. Caducus there is some good stuff in this poem but it just doesn't tickle my fancy. -6-
on Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin
10 Feb 2003, 1:27 PM
Still perverting the minds of the you I see Smiley. -10-
P.S. on a side note I have heard that scarfing does give a male an instant hard on. Just thought I'd share.
P.S. on a side note I have heard that scarfing does give a male an instant hard on. Just thought I'd share.
on some deleted poem
9 Feb 2003, 7:41 AM
Your a little too vague. Who is she and what happened that caused the faith to die? Most Importantly What Can't You Take? I like the Idea and what you barely get across but you need more detail. -6- For now but I think you can make it better.
on some deleted poem
9 Feb 2003, 7:45 AM
But let others take it AS a no. Seems just a slight bit redundant. -6-
on some deleted poem
8 Feb 2003, 10:18 PM
Now that was interesting and for a second the numbers had me a little confused, but I get it now and I like what I see(even if not many other people here will because its got the whole bleeding heart teen thing going on and they hate that) so I gave it a -8-.
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on Ghost Girl by wordontheverge
8 Feb 2003, 10:10 PM
Ummm... But in a good way so -10-
on some deleted poem
7 Feb 2003, 8:46 PM
Yes as a religion buff I'm confused by the three day thing as well. But other than that your writing is profound as usual.
on some deleted poem
3 Feb 2003, 6:18 PM
I like the airport scene combined with porn star/whores thing to point out that its like a really good 1 night stand. Very good.-10- Just for using the words porn star, cortex, and whores, with other brain imagery and not boring me.
on some deleted poem
3 Feb 2003, 6:05 PM
The last stanza, while i like it doesn't really work well with the one before it. I really think you should switch Stanzas 6 and 7. It just seems alot better to me that way.
on some deleted poem
3 Feb 2003, 5:56 PM
Lovely arguement but if we are love and we try to posses love is that like trying to cage ourselves?
on wanker by w~* ATHENA *~w
2 Feb 2003, 4:32 AM
That gellar part is just outta left field some where and its not like the rest of the poem is tied together very well either so enjoy your zero.
on NASA Fireworks by TheDevil
2 Feb 2003, 4:22 AM
A big zero for taste. In fact I'd give it two if i could.
on Why Me? by Tarquin De La Bog
2 Feb 2003, 1:16 AM
Zzinnia66 are you inbreed??? Cause this poems great and well you do leave alot of comments that have absolutly nothing to do with either the poem you post to or even the topic of the comments posted.
on some deleted poem
7 Feb 2003, 8:49 PM
SWELL!