Christain, Christain, Christian. Jesu have mercy on your soul, you take one concept and apply it while forgetting all the rest. For instance, Judge lest not ye be judged, love thy neighbor, and you ignore the majority of christian history. How many crusades have there been? George's point of view(or the one he has tryed to express) is that he is helping his nieghbor(Iraq) by being its doctor and cutting out the diseased tissue. Look you have faith in god right? Well I have to call you one of little faith. If god, has a plan for everything, than he has a reason to have W. leading our nation. Cap him all you want but don't dog his faith cause you don't believe that for whatever reason he should be there.

P.S. Christ is supposedly perfect, Men are not. Remember that.

Left Wing all the way, even if I some what agree with what you have to say, more opinion that poem. Try maybe you should try ryhming.

Decent but as I'm sure you've been told runs long

Better than what I've read so far but still not quite "free thinking enough"

Yig! I say, Sure you got a message but your just saying it with no style, no flare, no room for any intereptation. Try giving a little effort at being poetic.

Such Talent such skill, brings a tear to my eye. Since I did get a good Laugh (We're talking 3 whole minutes here) -10-.

Haha, sorry... I try and see the best in poems but this one didn't seem to make me feel anything at all. I'll say this for you, you managed you be a little chiche, without diving off the deep end but your words fail to make any emotion conection to me. Not Bad, Not Good. Nothing really outstanding other than it doesn't strike me as either good writing or bad. Since I feel neutral to this poem -5-.

Hmmm... D.A.'s Vote here with a so much as a real word surprises me. Personally I thought this was good but not worthy of 10. I'd say more like an 8. Its good but just a little cliche, don't ask me how it manages not to be.

Some style some flare but not really much there -6-

Whats a speedo working or not have to do with a truck? I'd give you the money to you if I wasn't planning on buying a drumset, 4 ounces of joy, and fixing my own car. -6-

Well Said. -10-

Deeply touching but I'm not sure why. -10-

A woman after my own heart -9-

Hmmmm... A little melodramatic and defiantly not worthy of a darwin awarde. Try being either steping out of the norm, in how you kill yourself or describe it in a very detailed account till either the point of; last dying breath, lost strengh to continue writing, or shortly after regret for taking your life has just begun(anything longer than 3 lines there tends to get old). I prefer an odd way to die mixed with lose of ablitity to write further. -3-

consider these as replacing your last lines with(walls within, hidden behind my thick skin) -9-

Seems to me that there are a few awkward places if I read it out loud. Other than the "We've got a hundred reasons to live;" it seems to extend just about a breath too far compared to the rest of the lyric. Very nice tho -9-