on wish by daniella
5 Jun 2003, 2:49 PM
Indeed.
on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw
5 Jun 2003, 2:46 PM
Your right he's not.
replying on The Outcry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Jun 2003, 3:11 PM
Crap now you tell me!!
on Stealing lightning from the pulpit by horus8
2 Jun 2003, 2:12 PM
Sound proposal to me.
on Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna
27 May 2003, 6:18 PM
Yes Roses are out dated but nowhere other than the title does it actually say rose. I think Its a little harash to say that they'll Never write that well Bachus, I mean hey who knows? I give this a -7- cause its not bad but is a bit cliche(no offense), even tho you did the cliche well, I'm afraid I've seen better.
on I Am(Defined) by lil cindy lu who
27 May 2003, 5:58 PM
Meh, I have a hard time relating each stanza to the others execept 1 and 4. -6- But only cause I see room for improvement.
on A Summers Day In Stolen Eden by Mr Pig
27 May 2003, 5:52 PM
Truely Worthy of Being dedicated to our Fine Feathered Friend. -10-
on Under a Streetlight in Paris by blurryphotograph
27 May 2003, 1:29 PM
Deserving so much more, but it'll have to do. -10-
on Gunshy Martyr by blurryphotograph
27 May 2003, 1:26 PM
LOL, humorish. -9-
on a new generation by blurryphotograph
27 May 2003, 1:23 PM
Amazingly well done.
on Time flies (or why i never have time on my hands) by blurryphotograph
27 May 2003, 1:19 PM
Quite Poetic, Similar to One of D.A.'s recent poems, but yours is actually a poem. -10-
on Being Here by Miggy
27 May 2003, 1:16 PM
Well written and Enjoyed very much. -10-
on No Tomorrow by Miggy
27 May 2003, 1:13 PM
-10-
on Over and Gone by Miggy
27 May 2003, 1:07 PM
I've been there before and it sux AWARDE. -10-
Great writing this, If you ever record it as a song let me know.
Great writing this, If you ever record it as a song let me know.
replying on Silent Hunger by kassanna
27 May 2003, 1:01 PM
Even so that makes the discovery, funny that it took her that long figure it out.
on Silent Hunger by kassanna
27 May 2003, 12:37 PM
Ouch! thats so brilliant, It makes my head hurt. Discovery of a Simple Truth. -10-
replying on A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom
26 May 2003, 10:06 PM
Your pretenous I've give you that and as I read more and more of your poems and comments I'm actually kinda glad your leaving.