poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Nanshe (41-60) and replies

Comments byNanshe, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on (untitled) by Ray 24 Feb 2003, 4:50 PM
so....dare I say...bad?
replying on A Lost Friend by Ray 24 Feb 2003, 4:43 PM
Have you a pregnant chickie with yoooooooooooou? Great fun, getting there, eh?
I thought you were going boarding???
replying on A Lost Friend by Ray 24 Feb 2003, 4:24 PM
I think it's the scotch ON THE ROCKS more so than being a capper, MISTER FOSTER.
on Lamente el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}> 24 Feb 2003, 4:20 PM
This entire series is money, my friend. Well done.
replying on He put a price on her head by Nanshe 24 Feb 2003, 4:19 PM
I have an low-maintenance gold fish or 2 (Hannibal, and soon-to-be-eaten-so-i-don't-have-a-name-for-a-month-or-two).
And a bumble bee catfish.
One of my goldfish (H) is 4 years old, and regularly eats his tank-mates, excepting Bee. Thus the name. Not sure of the gender, but following the mythic tradition, I ascribe him a penis.
replying on Stout Stick by Enki 23 Feb 2003, 9:28 PM
Not to those who have spent time locked in sheds.
on And Then She Got Over It by Freethinker1602 23 Feb 2003, 9:17 PM
Take notes as you walk.
on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}> 23 Feb 2003, 9:03 PM
Your random capitalisation and punctuation errors distract from the punch of this; also, i tend to agree that the subject needs to be better defined for the reader to feel empathy on the order of magnitude you seem to be courting. S2L2 "then" should be "Than"
on missing time by Bill Z Bub 23 Feb 2003, 8:51 PM
Nice reconstruction of a moment gone too soon.
on The last day of an old year by poetandknowit 23 Feb 2003, 8:38 PM
Detox? Recovery? Grief? Rebirth? All of these, and coffee. The protracted awareness borne of desolation, well sung. You have a bell of a voice, Mr. Knowit.
on Never Alone at Night by Limness 23 Feb 2003, 8:36 PM
I smile at your foolishness, and comfort you, dear. Move on, now. you must, or you shall waste.