on The Heart of a Man by Queen of Tease
27 Jul 2003, 1:14 PM
Damn
What have men done to you?
Or what have they not done for you?
What have men done to you?
Or what have they not done for you?
on lament and retrograde by Don-Quixote
17 Sep 2003, 12:57 PM
pretty good stuff
hello
hello
on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Aug 2003, 11:32 PM
whoa....i've been gone for a few days and when i come back three poems in the top ten!
poemranker never fails to surprise...
- 10 -
poemranker never fails to surprise...
- 10 -
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2003, 10:29 AM
bum beating...great...
i used to volunteer at my university's morgue
and one day they brought in a dead bum who had died in the cold of winter. well i got the wonderful job of undressing the poor fuck. And i found out that dead people release their bowels. I had shit all over my hands and clothes. I never went back there again.
i used to volunteer at my university's morgue
and one day they brought in a dead bum who had died in the cold of winter. well i got the wonderful job of undressing the poor fuck. And i found out that dead people release their bowels. I had shit all over my hands and clothes. I never went back there again.
on Prison Dinner 'Lady' by scitz
28 Jul 2003, 10:31 AM
Haha
that's great
that's great
on Demonic Chef by DreamerSupreme
28 Jul 2003, 10:33 AM
"of my youth"
how old are you?
how old are you?
on Demonic Chef by DreamerSupreme
28 Jul 2003, 10:33 AM
mr piggy
on The Rose by Queen of Tease
27 Jul 2003, 1:09 PM
sweet little poem
"in it's rose colored wear"
i don't think a rose has one certain color.
One can prolly saw RED but they can also be white, pink, orange, a mix of all the three, or even violet.
and you used rose in the line above so it sounds repettitive.
"gentle perfume there for my nose to consume"
is a nice rhyme but the word consume makes me think of eating up everything greedily. gentle/consume sounds kinda weird unless you meant it.
u should keep it in a vase with water
or it will wither and dry
"in it's rose colored wear"
i don't think a rose has one certain color.
One can prolly saw RED but they can also be white, pink, orange, a mix of all the three, or even violet.
and you used rose in the line above so it sounds repettitive.
"gentle perfume there for my nose to consume"
is a nice rhyme but the word consume makes me think of eating up everything greedily. gentle/consume sounds kinda weird unless you meant it.
u should keep it in a vase with water
or it will wither and dry
on Memoirs II by http://mulberryfairy
26 Jul 2003, 11:32 PM
that's great
seriously
it is
seriously
it is
on orange vanilla sky by ~ska~
25 Jul 2003, 1:51 PM
where did it go away to?
where was it in the first place?
what is orange vanilla sky?
thank you
where was it in the first place?
what is orange vanilla sky?
thank you
on Kakistocracy by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Jul 2003, 1:58 PM
what is kakistocracy
on summer feeling by nolan
28 Jul 2003, 10:32 AM
GREASE!
on I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy
31 Jul 2003, 1:56 PM
haha this is great
on The Poem Without an End Working Towards the Beginning by TheVoiceless
30 Sep 2003, 1:58 PM
it's simple...look at the crap in the top 15...especially the #1
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2004, 11:02 PM
UGH!
Such a Disgusting Retarded Poem!
Stop WRITING!
Such a Disgusting Retarded Poem!
Stop WRITING!
on Nina Simone (part one) by zodiac
2 Feb 2004, 12:14 AM
beautiful
cast a spell on you
cast a spell on you
on feelings of the inside by SweetJuliet10
13 May 2004, 11:32 PM
just take some tylenol
on Today, last year was on a Sunday by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Mar 2005, 1:24 PM
hello, pink bunny
on some deleted poem
8 Mar 2005, 1:26 PM
banda aceh...tsunamied? wet? debris? dead bodies?
lol
lol
What is 'it'?